| "Anime Invaded" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: DdotEXE [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 10:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like the idea of that but insted of rewriting the whole story try to make it that she had strees or hit her head on the next jump changing her attuide or she has a multiple personalitie that she hid from her freinds. just a few ideas
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Reviewed By: Dragon Phage On: July 30, 2005 19:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well... I wouldn't mind if you changed Maggie a bit, but... would she still be the hyperactive girl she is now? I rather like her. She really does remind one of Ed from Cowboy Bebop. If you could keep that... While still doing the new things you want her to do... Is that possible?
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Reviewed By: nnnnnnnn On: May 11, 2005 10:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
loved it write more
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