| "Paraphilia" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: Amazing!!!
Reviewed By: BbyGirl On: June 04, 2011 10:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!your style of writing is very interesting,and you choose some beautiful ways of saying what you want to say.please continue it,and 'Erotic' too,I really caught in love with 'Erotic' and I crave for it but enough with that I'm really sick....good job!please continue them. |
Title: write more
Reviewed By: ruthie balboa On: November 26, 2009 03:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even though I may not be a big Karasu fan, you make me like him. I really like this story and you should continue it! I also like 'Erotic' and think that you need to update that story as well. Please write more! (Note that I am stingy with my ratings. I have never given a 10 and most of the time give a 6 or 7).
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Reviewed By: Among-The-Roses [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 16:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a HOT fic-totally original-way cool- good job!!!!(WRITE MORE OF THIS AND EROTIC!!!!!!-plz ^^
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Reviewed By: misticfox [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 16:22 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is realy good!! i've been searching for this story for a long time, i read it at a friends house but she wouldnt tell me what it was called or where she had found it at!! i hope its updated soon!!
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Title: Carinito
Reviewed By: Carinito [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 18:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still love it! It's awesome Your chapters are always a thrill. This one is no exception. And it was a very naughty naughty chapter, but you are forgiven (kiddin'). I love this pairing and situation. I definitely will keep following the story. I felt this would be very promising... and I was right. I hope others agree with me too. Well awaiting your next chapter... don't rush... unless you want to. hehe
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 20:53 EDT
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Kurama/Karasu... siblings... Its so taboo Id have to be crazy not to like your story... Oh wait... I am... But STILL, awesome story, first Ive read like it. I hope you update soon!
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Title: Carinito
Reviewed By: Carinito [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 21:14 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the first chapter! This is a very original plot. Haven't seen a story like it so far. I haven't read the 2nd chapter yet (can't stay on line for a long time) but I'm sure I will love it. Your writing is very creative and I enjoy your stories greatly.
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Reviewed By: Lareina On: June 08, 2005 17:25 EDT
Comment/Review:
I like this story a lot, and I like how it's going. Just one thing- When you take off the -san of oniisan, it sounds like Kurama is calling Karasu a ogre. Oni=Onii, get it? May that's just me, though...
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Title: This is great
Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: June 07, 2005 02:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
helcat805: wow....just wow. i really liked this story *my sick little mind is happy* This one is going in my favorite list and you are going in my favorite author list. please update on this one, even if it's only Dominic Shade and i who read it.
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Title: Dominic Shade
Reviewed By: Dominic Shade [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 12:15 EDT
Comment/Review:
I'm already fully interested in this fict. I hope that my sadistic nature is content in reading what you have to offer in this story and I already anxiously await an update for this. But are you going to put the whole YYH cast in this? I'm hoping not...I really want to see what you can do with only two main characters. Of course the parents will be in, but I really interested in how their relationship will even develope. It seems so far that Kurama idolizes his older brother, but maybe Karasu learned some things from America? Please continue this, no matter the number of reviews you get for it.
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