| "Kagome's Pets" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Great Start!
Reviewed By: nashkitty On: June 08, 2005 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a big fan of the Koga/Kagome stories (probably b/c I'm one of the few ppl who think Koga is cuter than Inuyasha). And I must say this is a great story. Your writting is remarkable, unlike some of the stuff I have read on here...not to knock anyone, after all practice makes perfect. I gave a low spelling/grammar because of a few missed commas and a few times you said "Kagome" when you meant "Koga" but it's not a big deal. At the beginning you said you don't have time to edit it, and I think I have a suggestion for you. Whenever I need something to be looked over, I usually get a friend to do it. Preferably someone who can spot spelling/grammar mistakes lol. Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Update soon plz!!! *flashes big puppy dog eyes* lol
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Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 18:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this story!!! ^-^ Great job and I wait impatiently for the next chappie.
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Title: "Kagome's Pets"
Reviewed By: hunnybunny16 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! this story is so detailed,I love how you use such descriptive language! And don't worry, as a fellow fan-fic author I must say that my chapters are a LOT shorter than yours!
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