| "Hidden Intentions" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: YAAAY to hentai!!
Reviewed By: Aine On: June 08, 2005 10:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Lookie I was too lazy to log in, too! ^_~ YAAAY you added the pervy stuff!!! I like ;o) Of course you probably knew that I would!! Yeah' I get to play nurse maid today because my 8yr old decided that he was 'sick'. Or more to the point he wanted to go swimming... So I had to leave work. Oh' well... I guess it isn't to bad, i can read FF, work on my story and fold laundry... Yippeee... No swimming though ;o) Oh' can I officially put in my request for a Trigun fict now? Yeah' I know... all the pressure... ;o) Heeee... later, Aine
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Reviewed By: shadow runner On: May 29, 2005 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it keep writing please;]
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Title: Happy Thursday!
Reviewed By: Aine of Knockaine [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I saw that you updated so I just had to read and review again! First, I have to tell how much of a dork I am... I just got done watering my plants and shot myself with the hose! Oi' ;o) Now I'm all wet! Any who... You know I like your writing and I'm really looking forward to you unleashing some of those plot bunnies!!! Can't wait for the next chapter (wink) Kisses, Melissa
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Reviewed By: The Human Dictionary On: May 18, 2005 14:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
...I dunno. I did enjoy your writing style, and you've basically got the characters down, but just their cores. For the most part, they were a bit too whiny. Also, I'm wondering why this is in the hentai category, and just where this story is going. Keep writing though, it's the only way to improve.
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Title: good
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2005 10:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is good, plz continue it, i'd like to see what reaction hiei does if botan lets it slip that she likes him....heheheheh.... well very good story plz continue
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Title: HEY!
Reviewed By: Aine of Knockaine [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is it fun to read? Of course it is!!! However, I'm waiting for the naughty stuff!!! Are you done yet?! Heh' :o) Aren't you glad Summer break is here?! (Well for you it is... I still have to work) I'm hoping to see a Trigun story, too yah' know! Later, Aine
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great start! A Hiei and Kuwabara mission in which things that were hidden become known? Should make a terrific story. Well written and nicely in sync with the characters and prior episodes.
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