| "30 Shards - Sesshoumaru and Kagome" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Karen in CT On: July 17, 2005 10:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You certainly have talent. These flow very well internally. It was a little confusing that the shards are out of temporal order but that's not a big problem. I would be interested in shards that show the other characters' points of view on Sesshoumaru joining the group.
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Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 06:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
cute, I liked it. kind of short, I am interested in how Kagome and Sesshomaru fell in love. And who else survived the battle with Naraku? And what does the title mean? BUT I agree with Trouble_In_Shangri_La, nice tale about a quite moment.
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Reviewed By: Trouble_In_Shangri_La [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 11:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really liked the simplicity of this. I love authors who can just take a quiet moment and write a story about it. And I agree with Kagome here - Sess would be nice to look at between the sheets ~_^
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