| "The Street Musician" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: Silver Angeliss-too lazy to sign in On: May 25, 2005 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter. It was so melodic and sweet with great descriptions of their feelings. The only problem is you put the commas in the wrong place. "It should look like this," instead of "like this",
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: May 18, 2005 10:30 CDT
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i'm interested. keep up the good work and i hope you update again soon!
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Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 19:21 CDT
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YES! ^-^ Great job and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ms.Shay On: May 16, 2005 17:14 CDT
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Oops i mean "from" hehe sorry ^^;
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Reviewed By: Ms.Shay On: May 16, 2005 17:11 CDT
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poor Miroku you'll get to Songo some how ^^ Anyway like i said last time i LOVE it keep 'em comin my sista ^^b and will InuYasha's mother get well for her illness? do tell =^.^=
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Reviewed By: Ms.Shay On: May 12, 2005 17:56 CDT
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Damn thing >.> anyway i love it keep writing
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Reviewed By: Ms.Shay On: May 12, 2005 17:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 15:55 CDT
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I LOVE IT!!!!! ^-^ great job and I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: gale89 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 10:18 CDT
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it seems realy good so far i hope you intend to continue writing. pls update soon if only for my sake. please and thankyou.
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