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Reviewed By: rachainu. On: July 11, 2005 14:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so happy when I read that my review gave you the biggest smile that you've had in a long time! It made me feel kind of special! I love the story so far. I tend to more enjoy reading fan fictions with long, detailed, well written chapters such as yours. I'm glad that you were glad that I reviewed. It's okay that we all had to wait for the new chapter because it was worth it in my opinion. I really enjoyed this chapter. I totally get what you're saying about the characters here, it is refreshing to see them acting differently in the story than in the series. Yeah, as far as InuYasha is concerned, I agree that it's a 'what if' situation. And I think that the way you're going about the whole thing is great. Yeah, you have Miroku toned down as a lecher, but I like that! I like how you're painting Sango's cautious picture, if you know what I mean! Kagome's really helpful to both Sango and InuYasha. I'll keep my eyes peeled for certain hints. Eww, peeled eyeball, that's a scary thought...*shiver* Gosh, Kagome and InuYasha sure were doing some pretty bold things in that dorm room! Whoa, down doggy. Good boy! I think everything is going great so far with what you're doing. Keep up the great work! Until next review, bye. And PLEASE update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ms.Shay On: June 30, 2005 23:10 CDT
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this chappy was great! i'm glad thaat inu's mom is getting better =) this story gettin better w/ every chappy! keep it up! and i love the intemate sean w/ inu and kags ^.~b
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Reviewed By: rachainu. On: June 13, 2005 13:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This story is really great so far. Your chapters are so long and the content is so in depth and I love that, you've got so much talent. The relationship between Inuyasha and Kagome, the way you write it makes it seem almost magical in a way. And the way you write Miroku and Sango's relationship, it totally defines a cautious heart learning to trust in new things! Your lyrics fit the situations perfectly and they were great. You are definitely going on my favorite author's list. I feel sorry for Inuyasha, though. I don't know what I'd do if I was close to losing my mother like that. But what's relieving is that he has somebody like Kagome there, ready to brace him for the change that would occur. It seems that Miroku's starting to believe in different things as far as relationships with women are concerned since he's been with Sango and I think he's learned the good feeling of possible sturdiness that comes with one steadily solidifying relationship. Great chapter. I really hope that you continue to write it! Please update soon! Bye!
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Reviewed By: Ms.Shay On: June 10, 2005 16:24 CDT
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Yes it was worth the wait. im woundering is this ganna be a Inu/Kag lemon or something? also it made me sad when i read about InuYasha's mother geting worse with the her illness. i hope that she gets better soon. if she dosent then make it quick and painless /cry. i love the fact that Kags can read Inu like an open 1-3 childrens book. its so cute ^.^ so Miroku and Sango are slowly gettin together thats very good. what happened to Sess? or did you say that in a diffrent chappy im just woundering anyway this is a great great great chappy!!!!!!!!! please up date soon. THANK YOU
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Title: OMG THIS IS SO GOOD
Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 18:24 CDT
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What is it with you and writing such original and perfect fanfic's?! All your fanfic's seem to be so original and so well put down. Just like 'unaware' this one is a masterpiece. It's to bad it only has a few chaps though, but there very long ones so that makes it okay again haha =P and yet again I'm so caught up in reading your fanfic it's half past 1 on the morning already and I need to work tomorrow early >.<
I think you also manage to keep your fic's very apart from each other, most stories made by the same person have the same story lines *hides behind her desk for all the pointy things thrown at her by angry fanfic writers* but in this fic it's more (well Kagome / Inu Yasha of course) but more Miroku/ Sango then you had in 'Unaware' there you had more Sesshumaru/ Rin. Keep the originality in it gurl! I'm rooting for ya hahaha =P your fic's rule ^^ UPDATE SOON! And keep up the great work with all u'r fic's they very good! Bubai, Big K!$$ and lots of Love ~ Little Tennyo
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Reviewed By: Ms.Shay On: June 04, 2005 13:36 CDT
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i LOVE LOVE LOVE this chappy its so cute!!!! what can i say but KEEP GOING if you havent noticed i love Inu/Kag stories and i think yours just became my favroit!!!! so like i said GO GO GO GO GO GO GOOOOOOO!!!!! please write more please (Gets on her knees and beggs) =^.^=
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Reviewed By: Silver Angeliss-too lazy to sign in On: May 25, 2005 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter. It was so melodic and sweet with great descriptions of their feelings. The only problem is you put the commas in the wrong place. "It should look like this," instead of "like this",
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: May 18, 2005 10:30 CDT
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i'm interested. keep up the good work and i hope you update again soon!
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Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 19:21 CDT
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YES! ^-^ Great job and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ms.Shay On: May 16, 2005 17:14 CDT
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Oops i mean "from" hehe sorry ^^;
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Reviewed By: Ms.Shay On: May 16, 2005 17:11 CDT
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poor Miroku you'll get to Songo some how ^^ Anyway like i said last time i LOVE it keep 'em comin my sista ^^b and will InuYasha's mother get well for her illness? do tell =^.^=
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Reviewed By: Ms.Shay On: May 12, 2005 17:56 CDT
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Damn thing >.> anyway i love it keep writing
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Reviewed By: Ms.Shay On: May 12, 2005 17:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 15:55 CDT
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I LOVE IT!!!!! ^-^ great job and I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: gale89 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 10:18 CDT
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it seems realy good so far i hope you intend to continue writing. pls update soon if only for my sake. please and thankyou.
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