| "Amber Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Krystal-Nyte [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I love this fan fic! The songs you wrote for it are absolutally beautiful! Keep up the good work! Because you really have a talent! It was the best I've ever read on this site. Sad.. But good. My favorite part was the part where they sang! That just was cool! I loved how you did Kai's mom too! Krys
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Reviewed By: Hoshiko Megami On: September 16, 2005 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for letting me know. This is a great epilogue. I hope you write more! Keep up the great work!
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Title: Damn even this site gets bitchy at me at times
Reviewed By: Armith-Greenleaf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 21:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sis!! -tackles you- MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! Epilogue! Aww sis, darn its perfectly understandable that Rei felt so bad T.T i don't blame him really...ater all he went through (harsh stuff O.O) and he's marked by Tala and all -growls- who got some serious issues...good thing we got the TM Tala!!! -big grin- Good thing is, Kai's there to support him...sheesh! O.O Kai's like Rei's guardian angel O.O' a hot one at that, ahem. Oh and sis, i read the lemon...i survived the lemon...AAAAHHH I READ A GAY LEMON-well written of course, ahem...but erm, never doing it again sis ^^ Loved the end sis -sniffs- sad thing its the very end but good thing they're happy now -cheesy grin- everyone deserves to be happy! Even Sparky-Larky, no? -sniggers- Best Wishes from da big sis...-hugs-
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Title: Gomen... ^^;;;
Reviewed By: The Schizo of Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 16:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry for this disturbing message, but... Ignore the Mediaminer part in my last review, I thought it wouldn't work but eventually it did... ^^;; Once again I say; lovely story, keep it up -^^-
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Reviewed By: The Schizo of Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 16:00 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey !! Mediaminer refuses to let me review this story while I'm logged in, how mean !! (I'm a registered member though, if you don't believe me you can check the members list...) Oh well, lets get to the point; I loved this !! I really cried when Kai, Rei and Tala all got hurt... Tala was mean, but I was still hoping he'd get a second chance... He couldn't help it if he was abused, right ? About Rei's hair... Poor Rei !! I understand his feelings, I'd be devastated if someone would cut my hair off o.O It's my greatest fear, don't tell anyone X3 It's a shame not many people reviewed, cause I think they really should *nods* You should get an award for this, it's really beautiful -^^- Keep up the fabulous writing !! ~*~Schizy~*~
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Title: AMBER EYES
Reviewed By: L3V@N@ On: August 14, 2005 05:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY ITS L33!!!I LOVED THIS STORY IT MADE ME CRY...THE ENDING MADE ME CRY AND THE PART WERE THEY BASHED MY MAN AND CUT HIS HAIR!!!I LOVE RAI, AND IT WAS SO SAD WHEN THEY CUT HIS HAIR AND BEAT HIM UP... ANYWAY LOVLY STORY I LOVED IT... G2G LATERZ...
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Reviewed By: Kathryn_Ivanov On: August 11, 2005 10:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
suprisingly, the part about that that made me sad was that they cut his hair!!!! his beautiful hair!!!! i love his hair, its gonna grow back right? rei isnt rei without the hair!!!!!! overall it was a very creative and well written story.
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