| "Love Doesn't Always Triumph" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kurisuti Kamae On: August 08, 2007 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey The last two chapters were really good but seriously don't let Yoko easily just not punish her further just because he feels guilty. I mean I think a demon like him would lose his temper to some degree, especially if he suspects the child isn't his. I mean plz show some more confllict cuz it'll make it more realistic and interesting. sry, horror lover.
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Title: Green?
Reviewed By: Nony-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 02:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this Fanfic ^_^ Just because it's so much fun to read. I loved the cheeseburger part, though the last chapter threw me for a minute. It makes me sad, so I hope the next chapter comes out soon.
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Title: Heh heh heh
Reviewed By: Meez On: April 15, 2006 09:39 CDT
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... *'Dirty Little Secret' plays in background* Enough said, ne?
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Title: Whoot-whoot
Reviewed By: Meez On: April 01, 2006 23:56 CST
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Dude...2 in the morning...and Yame just falls asleep on Hiei's shoulder. Priceless. Still have no voice, so just imagine me waving my arms around and smiling like a mad man. Peace, love, and may your nachos be cheesy.
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Title: =^-^=
Reviewed By: Meez On: February 11, 2006 21:09 CST
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Dude...I loveded it...yeah...Azriel and Hiei...chee!
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: KitsuneforlifeYokoschick [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 14:12 CDT
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I like the story alot please update
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Reviewed By: Salanti [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 03:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
pretty good, its 4 AM. my dad just yelled at me so i need to go to bed, keep it up!*yawn* ja ne.
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Reviewed By: vadkakid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 20:02 CDT
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well looks like you got a chapter out ^.^ yay *dances* anywho, its 10 pm so im off to bed. g'night!~Vadkakid~
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Reviewed By: kenela [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 22:02 CDT
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awww...sorry u cant use the computer this summer. i rly like your story. update as soon as u can.
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Reviewed By: Eppy_dono [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 14:18 CDT
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"...He had to make a deal with the guy that implanted his Jagan. If he was to tell her, he'd loose it..." This is true, he did really make a deal with Shigure, the man who implanted the Jagan into his forehead that he couldn't tell Yukina ANYTHING about them being brother and sister. He also had to pay with the tear gem his mother cried and her friend gave to him before he was thrown from the Koorime (sp?) cloud into the Makai below. (*I'vecertainly watched too much YYH*)
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Reviewed By: vadkakid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 13:47 CDT
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whoa!! that was steamy lol^.^ anyway, cant wait for the next chapter!!oh yea, welcome inuyasha-lovers and eppy-dono to the story^.^ TTFN^.^~Vadkakid~
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Title: . . . . .
Reviewed By: Eppy-dono (Too lazy to login...) On: June 14, 2005 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
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-claps- Getting good, getting good. -hands over a bucket of chocolate chip cookies-
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 10:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi! ilove this please up date soon *hands over a choclet chip cookie*
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Title: . . . . . .
Reviewed By: Eppy_dono [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 09:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O;;; Am I seriously the only other person?!
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Reviewed By: vadkakid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 16:45 CDT
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OMG!! i wonder if the baby will be a boy or girl... anyway, your stories are inproving greatly!! they have gotten much better and they are still fun to read^.^ can't wait for the next chapter!~Vadkakid~
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