| "True Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: EmeraldOrchidOfGabriel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 17:56 CDT
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Wow, great story transition on chapter 2. I'm really wondering what's going to happen in the next one! the foreshadowing is so great it's driving me crazy... gimme some answers! lol j/k that's a good thing. You'va made some interesting new characters too. Keep it up! I'll keep reading!
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Reviewed By: EmeraldOrchidOfGabriel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 17:32 CDT
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Great story, I love Destiny! She is such a tough chick, totally independent, and a role model for any girl (especially the wussies we have these days). I love the foreshadowing and the internet convo. Good stuff nyteangel!
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Title: *sigh*
Reviewed By: Skylily [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 10:35 CDT
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Ok.... when are YOU going to give me the papers? I would love to print them out of mine but.... my printer is out of commision...-_- *....* Good job with another chapter!And give me the damn papers already damn it!!!!!
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Reviewed By: lena321 On: June 18, 2005 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE your story please keep on writing ok. or Ill hunt you down.j/k.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story please up date soon
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Title: review
Reviewed By: dawnstar28 On: June 07, 2005 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
did you get the name 'numair' from a book, or did you make it up? cuz ive read a book with that name in it. tamora pierce's books...lol, i luv ur story, keep up the good work and i hope that you can update soon.
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Title: *whacks Angel with a stick*
Reviewed By: CrazyNDiffferent On: May 26, 2005 18:39 CDT
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That was NOT me who passed gas and you know it! The story was swell, Pyro rocks my socks, but it's name should be Millie if I'm not correct. The cat should also be tugboat shaped. On a more serious note....RAWR! Good story!
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Reviewed By: Celestyne On: May 24, 2005 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job with the second chapter! Keep upo the good work. Like Lily says, it is getting more interesting. See some grammar mistakes here and there but who even cares about that. Good luck with your exam and hope you update soon. ps. this is the girl who loves your story ^_^
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Reviewed By: SKylily(not logged in here!) On: May 24, 2005 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ Thank for the credit! I'll take them all since it is for me! *evil giggles* Anyways, gettin' more interestin' here. Where IS Kitch? *looking around* and where the hell is my fridge?!!!!*frustrated* Mr. Fridge? *run and look for the fridge* Bye Angie!
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Reviewed By: fireflyskies [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 21:47 CDT
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loved that chapter, can't wait for the next one. Sorry about your exams and stuff, I'm having the same problem.
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Reviewed By: fireflyskies [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 18:36 CDT
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love your story, update so I can read more
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Title: heyy heyy :)
Reviewed By: beccapatty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heyy :) I saw ur review for my story The New Girl At Shikon High and i came and read ur profile and ur story.. Love the story soo far.. can't wait till ya update.. also ya have great taste is storys.. Sueric is one of my favorite authors as well.. I love Chronicles, Purity, Metamorphosis.. etc.. all awesome .. If u wanna read my all time favorite Inuyasha fanfic tho.. its called THE LUCKY ONES! SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD! .. Its at www.kokolio.com by the author Terri botta... Heres the direct link to her story!.. read it and lemme know if u like it as much as me! http://www.kokololio.com/guiltypleasures/archive/terribotta/theluckyones/ I love the way they talk to each other in this one and to Yukio.. U'll see what i mean .. and u will love it! hehe ~Beccapatty~ aka ... LullabyeBabidoll (aim sn) or Beccapatty(yahoomessenger)
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Reviewed By: CrazyNDifferent On: May 14, 2005 20:14 CDT
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Oi! Pretty slick there. *mutters* better be after I read it a million times. AND, go Lion and NippleRing!
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Reviewed By: Skylily [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 13:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol! go Kitch! Keep writing so I can keep my job as ur editor!
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Reviewed By: girl who love ur story On: May 14, 2005 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Nice start and I love your character Kitch! Go fridge king!!!
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