| "True Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: EmeraldOrchidOfGabriel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 10:28 CST
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KICK ASS CHAPTER! GO ANGEL GO! Emerald
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 18:53 CST
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come on Angel......i no ur busy and all but can u seriously WRITE FASTER.........u havent updated in FOREVER!!!!!!!!!! come on!!! ur plots good.....and really everything else about it is good 2.......keep writing and DONT GET DOWN........Cheers
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Title: Stalker
Reviewed By: TehSister On: September 27, 2005 19:40 CDT
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-gigglesnort- All of y'all should hear how excited Angel is. And I'm claiming myself her offical stalker ^^. Continue writing Angel, since I have nothing to make fun of. ;-;
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Reviewed By: KICKASSCHICK On: September 27, 2005 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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WORK ON UR SPELLING ANGEL.....but besides that awesome..short sweet(or sour)and simple...gotta love the old times eh
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Reviewed By: GreenDayBabe On: September 27, 2005 18:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u know...this story comes pretty close to beating Green Day when it comes to style..ALMOST but nothing can top them...just lay off on the swearing a little would ya..my parents read over my shoulder and always tell me to tell the author to "clean up their language"....but unbelievable story otherwise
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Reviewed By: JimCarry On: September 27, 2005 18:42 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u kick butt girl...at least i would assume that u r a girl....but never mind...i totally dig the story...the plot line is kick...butt...just write more and more frequently
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Reviewed By: StarChik On: September 27, 2005 18:40 CDT
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U got it made....this story is the tops and CANT be beat....just WRITE MORE amd the equation will be perfect...the suspense is KILLING me
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2005 18:37 CDT
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Awesome chapter Angel...of course i might take some credit...but u did all of the hard work. It was unbelievable...u BETTER keep writing...this story is way too good 4 u to stop writing.
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Reviewed By: ChocoholiCuz49 On: September 10, 2005 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Angel, u rock...this is an awesome. The only thing i have to say is that u basically focus on Kira and Kitch...u dont really know anything else about the other 'guys'. Include them a lil bit more and itll be perfect. TTYL
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Reviewed By: KuroKaida [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 13:50 CDT
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Angel, don't MAKE me write your next chapter. You're disappointing people. 'When someone offers you a nintendo, what do you do? Duck and Cover'
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Title: kudos
Reviewed By: the currently not logged in "thesoulcollector" On: July 06, 2005 16:23 CDT
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update udate very realistic characters. Dest and the guys remind me of my own friends it was nice. i look foward to reading more - what grammar issues? death to clowns ;P
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Reviewed By: Celestyne On: July 01, 2005 14:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. I was away to Florida. I was expecting more chapters but good job and I love your story! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: fireflyskies [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 22:08 CDT
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Ilove your character Destiny. She is so fun to read about. I also love the guys. Great chapter, and keep up the good work.
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Title: -Rolls eyes yet again-
Reviewed By: KuroKaida [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 20:15 CDT
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SkyLily! Please edit chapter three before my head a'splode! Tick, tick, tick ^^-prods- that's my head. Anywho, it's pretty good. The whole story I mean, for I'm the only one who knows everything that happens ^-^ Keep writing, and never go in the men's bathroom when you hear Peter Griffen's voice....o.o Have a nice day ^-^ -KuroKaida/ Angel's sister
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Reviewed By: EmeraldOrchidOfGabriel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 18:14 CDT
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Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeez keep writing! I wanna know what's gonna happen!!!! U have a great storyline going, I just know something good is going to happen! Keep up the good work nyteangel!
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