| "Breaking Free" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mely On: July 08, 2005 22:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww! Such a sweet ending. I'm glad Bulma and Vegeta are fine. I would love to see a sequal! If Bulma wishes everyone back then won't there be a conflict with Brolly, Chi-Chi, And Goku? By the way, loved the lemon.
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Reviewed By: gina18 On: July 08, 2005 14:15 EDT
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i hope you`ll write a sequel because i love this fic. It´s good that Broly isn`t such a bad boy he really loves chichi and they both should`ve a happy end
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Reviewed By: Xtal On: July 08, 2005 01:43 EDT
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Update!!! I like it! ^^
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Title: NOOOO
Reviewed By: Dbzbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 23:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
POOR VETGETA!!! T__T I hope he survives!! great chapter!! your ability of writing fight scenes truly is GREAT! ^____^ stupid Freiza!! grr!! Never liked him >> MAN your getting a chapter each day!! THATS AWESOME!! *huggles* Keep up the GREAT work! I CANT wait for the next chapter!! WHOHO! xD MORE LEMON ScENES I HOPE! LOL
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Reviewed By: Mely On: July 07, 2005 21:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH NO!!!! How sad! Poor Chi-Chi! Poor Brolly! Poor Vegeta!!!! What's going to happen next? Is this a nightmare sequence, because I hope it is! I hope Bulma is alright. This story is great and your writing is good as well. Thanks for spoiling us with updates, not I expect an update tomorrow.
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Reviewed By: Mely On: July 06, 2005 20:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice lemon! You are spoiling us by updating back-to-back. Now I'll be expecting an update tomorrow. You are doing a great job with the story.
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Title: HAWT!!
Reviewed By: Dbzbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 19:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg..this lemon part on vegeta and bulma REALLY was hawt as heck! xD I enjoyed reading this chapter very much! You got skill!!! ^___^ I hope you do more vXb fanfictions!!! Im thinking of doing a fanart on the lemon scene!! Go to my website and check me out if you want! here it is dbzbabe.deviantart.com ^_^ IM A VXB FREAK!! xD Hope to hear from you!
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Reviewed By: Mely On: July 05, 2005 17:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again very good job. I wonder what Vegeta will do next with Bulma? It seem like poor Chi-Chi is falling for Brolly. Plese update soon! Oh by the way, nice lemon for the previous chapter.
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Reviewed By: Mely On: July 03, 2005 16:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad you update! I can't wait to read what will happen next. Oh that Vegeta is so seductive, making Bulma give in.
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Reviewed By: malimillions [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 14:13 EDT
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Okay, I adore this story. You're doing some really fantastic work..... But if Gohan killed off many of the members of the Turles corps in the last couple of chapters... where's Turles himself?
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Title: holy crap
Reviewed By: nightmaregod On: June 15, 2005 19:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy crap i forgot that there was this story, shadow-king told me but dammit i forgot. this was an awsome come-back for me. hahaha.
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Reviewed By: God-King On: June 04, 2005 16:24 EDT
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please update soon. i dont want to miss any of this fic.
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Reviewed By: BROLY_ROCKS On: June 01, 2005 19:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn man that was a cool chapter dude. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: God-King On: May 29, 2005 23:19 EDT
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dude its just like, he dosent have that vageta feal. i dont know, i think he dosent have enoughe pride, arogentness, and like he is saposed to be evil at first, and gradualy get kinder.( though its hard to tell with him) but yeah thats all. and damn you Shadow-King for makeing me go indepth. it was hard you basterd.
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Title: bitch
Reviewed By: cacoKILLA On: May 29, 2005 18:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude god-king so kinds right, like he aint proud enough. but i think other then that, you got him down.
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