| "Not As Pure As First Thought." Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Not As Pure As First Thought.
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: draechaeli [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats a good beginning for a fic (thats why I didn't rate the "Enjoyment Factor" it was cool but need more) so yes a great teaser of a beginning please update soon! ~Na
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Reviewed By: gale89 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 21:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
thats it? im sorry and it sounds interesting but when i finished with that chappie my first responce (sp) was thats it? it does sound interesting but maybe you should consider i dont know making your chappies longer or something.
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