| "My immortal" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: :(
Reviewed By: ghoul [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 13:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, this almost made me cry! >__< I really liked Pan being very realistic about her feelings and her relationship with Trunks, instead of being portrayed like a little child even though she's not. I wished this wasn't a One Shot :(
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Reviewed By: wynter89(mm) On: June 29, 2005 10:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was messed up. i hate it when stuff like that happens, to any one not just myself or favorite ca\haracter. it is a really good fic. Only pan, really caught me. wow i have sympathy for her. and trunks kissing her was sooo wrong if he loves marron. i hope she finds someone worthy of her. you could do a sequel. it is that great. i love it and i hope that you update soon. good luck may kami-sama be with you
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Title: -Crys-
Reviewed By: Yuki san [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, I really liked this story, it almost made me cry. But even though it was really sad, it made a whole hell of sense, and I could totally see that happening between Pan and Trunks. I hope you write more stroies or one-shots like this, it was really touching.
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