| "What Can I Do To Make You Love Me?" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 22, 2002 10:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful. Thank you for writing this. |
Reviewed By: HotstuffGohan On: June 23, 2002 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT WAS SO FUNNY,write more like it |
Reviewed By: jessbear [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2002 22:01 CST
Comment/Review:
THAT WAS... Fandillyanfuckintaztic Spazmagorical!
in english I LOVED IT! |
Reviewed By: Alexander [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2001 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoo! Finally a V/G with some damn bite! A little OOC, but it was made up with the humor, great story! It's hard to add characters to DBZ and still make it good, but you've pulled it off! |
Reviewed By: majinsk8rvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2001 23:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write a sequel!! i'll be waiting!! I really liked the whole story! it was so f-in' funny!! i hope your sequel will be even funnier!! since im not a huge g/v fan, this story has changed my perspective on their relationship!! Cant wait for the sequel... oh yeah!! don't put the backstreet boys anymore...PLEASE!! |
Reviewed By: Meis On: December 13, 2001 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story best I have ever read .Make more Gohan and Videl stories your best at them. |
Reviewed By: Meis On: December 12, 2001 17:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its ok abot my name.Ok I have a challenge for you finish the chapter you are working on and finish another one by 12/13/01 (tomorrow).Oh and make more stories like this dealing with dbz. |
Reviewed By: selena281 On: December 12, 2001 11:23 CST
Comment/Review:
(btw videl DOES seem nutz ^_~ ), but please write more i wanna see what happens!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Meis On: December 10, 2001 16:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok but please hurry and get 5and 6 out.And its not minna its Meis.And ur still doing a great job ,keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Meis On: December 09, 2001 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It keeps getting better by every chapter. Please hurry and write chapter four , please! |
Reviewed By: Tainted Fire On: December 08, 2001 11:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! Fun stuff Keep goin! |
Reviewed By: Ashley175 On: December 05, 2001 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please hurry and continue! |
Reviewed By: Meis On: December 02, 2001 20:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please hurry and start writing again on this story ,Please! |
