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Reviewed By: Huntress 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2009 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this ;) suggestive but not quite smutty...
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Reviewed By: roses_n_dragons [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this so far and I really think that you should do a second part for it. I've only recently gotten introduced to MoB but I love it and I love Naoe and Kagetura/Takaya. Excellent work!
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Reviewed By: dk_joy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2005 13:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ooohhhh!!! Please write more! That was awesome! A second part would be nice...
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Reviewed By: Aestrin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 10:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh, please do write a second part. especially if it's smut. *_* i must admit though - i didn't see that admission from takaya coming.
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Reviewed By: ochan On: September 07, 2005 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im soooo MOBsessed...This is an excellent fic, hope u post a second chapter of it soon, and full of yaoi of course ;) we are all waiting for it! Ganbatte!
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Reviewed By: Ru-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 14:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good. Please write another part to this.
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Reviewed By: Ohtori-chan On: June 13, 2005 22:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was, quite simply, the BEST fanfic that I have read on this site thus far. Not only was it grammatically correct with almost no spelling errors, it was beautifully and creatively written with a coherent plot (though I want part two!) and realistic rendering of the characters. Just great.
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Reviewed By: Cole'sLover On: June 02, 2005 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, wow, another great MOB fic! There are way too few out there. I like your writing style; this was a very enjoyable read. PLEASE, PLEASE do another chapter/sequel. If you write it I promise to read it. These guys deserve a little happiness (& smut LOL) after 400 hundred years. Keep up the find job of doing fanfics. ^ _ ^
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Reviewed By: SakuraRC On: May 27, 2005 08:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fan fic it great finally i found a satisfaying mirage of blaze fan fic with Naoe and Takaya parinig please make a sequel it's great im begging make another part~!
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Reviewed By: himitsu kunoichi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 00:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this fic. You have a bunch of great ideas and it would be awesome if you expanded on them ^^ I really like how you characterize Takaya and make the distinction between him and Kagetora. Wonderful I hope to see a sequal.
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Reviewed By: silverwyvern On: May 17, 2005 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I'm so glad to someone writing a Mirage of Blaze fic, with my fav pairing to boot. Great job, and I really hope you decide to write more!
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