| "Embracing Ice" Reviews/Comments [ 146 ] |
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Reviewed By: GoldenEyedGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 03:18 EDT
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ok.. now that was cool! lmao.. I can't wait for the next chapter... good luck and please update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: JackiaLioncourt On: July 17, 2005 07:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WONDERFUL CHAPTER!!!!! LOVE HOW U WROTE FLUFFY!!!!!! AND THE KISS WAS AMAZING..... HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON!!!!!! THIS FF IS SO GOOD!!!!!!! I WANT TO SEE WHAT WILL HAPPEN IF KAGOME RETURNS TO HER FUTURE...HOW WOULD SHE AND FLUFFY REACT TO EACHOTHER AND HOW WOULD INUYASHA TAKE THE NEW CHANGES...UPDATE SOON PLZZZZZZZ
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Title: T-T
Reviewed By: Ayeka Penor [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 21:56 EDT
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This chapter was excellent. It usually takes frustration to get me to cry, but this scene was just so powerful! As a woman I fear losing any children I may conceive, and perhaps that fear is what prompted such an emotional response from me. I must admit that when you were describing the part where Kagome realizes she is looking at an unborn pup the writing began to confuse me. It took a few mental leaps to catch up. Of course I did just finish a full work day after only an hour of sleep last night... Could be my brain shutting down.
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Reviewed By: GoldenEyedGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 14:56 EDT
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Awwww... how sad... I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. That was sad. Good luck
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Reviewed By: black-rose28, not logged on On: July 11, 2005 02:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope Inuyasha will still be born, because if Lady Bishou was shot by that arrow before Kagome was there, and she was supposed 2 die, that means that when Kagome killed the supposed-to-be-murderer of Lady Bishou, that Lord Konton will never leave Lady Bishou and wont meet the to-be-mother of Inuyasha, the human..so that means if they dont meet, NO INUYASHA DONT GO!! ugh i hope that doesnt happen! Well another great chapter, another great update, thats the story of my life. *dramatic sigh* o well
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Reviewed By: Saphire Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 19:34 EDT
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awww thats so sweet ^-^ but sad...hmm....now why does that sound a little bit familier...oh...yeah....> uh....yeah..so.. hows the weather?...okay I really liked that chapter! =3 twas very good!
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: July 07, 2005 11:41 EDT
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great chapter! i have a feeling that sess's parents are going to die .. :[ can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: moonwave (not logged in) On: July 05, 2005 18:57 EDT
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I tripped upon this story while wandering MM. I LOVE IT! But then again, I'm a sucker for a well written Sesshomaru fic. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: cute_kirara16 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 23:48 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY you story is going great. i hope you update asap. i love the little quirk you added in chapter 9 it was funny anyway update soon.
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Reviewed By: kk On: July 03, 2005 23:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol, "umm..making paper?" "oh..ok!" haha i cant bleave he got beat up by a tree! hehe i loved the new chapter keep up da good work!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: cute_kirara16 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 02:58 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG...this is such a wonderful fic. I love the way you put kagome further in the past...Oh please i beg you to update soon..YAY
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Reviewed By: Black_Rose28 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 23:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOOOOOVE it, its not like all the other sess/kag fics, i love the idea of Kagome going back in time THAT far! its seems like u researched alot..i think u said that in one of the earlier chapters anyways! Again: I LOVE IT LIKE I LOVE SESSHOMARU~! keep up da good work~!
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Reviewed By: Cava On: June 19, 2005 03:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've really enjoyed readin this fic so far. Its nice to see somethin dif bein written instead of the same stuff over and over again and believe me I'd know cause ive read ALOT of see/kag fics and so far this looks like it is gonna be one of my faves. Keep up the good work and update as soon as u can!! =P
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Title: Embracing Ice
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 02:21 EDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: kitty hanyou On: June 12, 2005 03:02 EDT
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This is so kool, u did a wonderful job with the plot and stuff!! I wish i was that good, please update soon!!
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