| "Embracing Ice" Reviews/Comments [ 146 ] |
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2007 20:52 EDT
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daaaarn that would suck ! I mean I know wolves have an hierarchy and all but I wouldnt have really thought that inu's would be like that too then again dog do tend to run on that base instinct of their ancestors , that is pretty kewl , there wont be too many "tests" will there ?
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2007 18:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man, that was edgy. I do realize that I would have failed that test quite miserably. I would have fried her ass!! That was crazy...submitting to someone who is attacking you without reason is nuts. But I think that this test didnt just show that Kagome can act on instint well, I think it also goes to show that she trusts this pack with her life, because she was being attacked without warning, without a real reason, and she laid down giving submission instead of fighting back. Man, as a taurus and a woman, submission is soooo not in my vocabulary, although God does have a humorous way of bringing me to my knees.....lawd, dont even get me started. Nice chapter, and thank you very much for the update!!
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Title: Chapter 26
Reviewed By: WiccanMethuselah [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 12:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, so go ahead and update here BEFORE Single Spark - I'll find it anyway!! VERY interesting developments... I don't recall any hint of testing for 'pack worthiness,' other than that minute reference at the end of the previous chapter. Obviously, this will have far-reaching effects - like all the way back to the feudal era?? "The plot thickens," INDEED! I'm so glad you're busy updating this again. I'm assuming, then, that the summer has gone well and a certain 'reunion' has taken place?? Given the citrus-y nature of the last couple chapters, speculation runs rampant! (Just kidding!!) Anyway, your writing is still of the same high caliber we've come to expect from the esteemed 'Yabou,' KUDOS!!! :D ~~Wiccan~~
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Title: Steamy
Reviewed By: Rinseternalsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 17:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one hot lime my friend! You know it's a hot one when you realize that you are panting along with the characters! LOL! I was kind of hoping Kagome would 'help' poor Sess out, BUT I know that she is not ready for that - yet. I wonder if demons get blue balls? Well, he can always give me a call and I'll be glad to relieve him. hehe Great job, as always. Oh, by the way, quit dreading the next chapter and get to writing it!! We are looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 22:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm loving this!! please keep up the good work , I only have one question when did she bite her, you didnt mention the when or where it was just a tiny bit confusing
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Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 19:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was a very good lime. And very appreciatted. Bravo!!! I cant believe they are poisoning her, that is just insane, even though I understand their purpose of doing so, will Sess?? Man o man, if he finds out or if something happens to her...oh boy!! Thanks for the update....and thank you Rinseternalsoul for the last lemon, as always, hawt as hell! Whoot!!
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Reviewed By: Brightshadow4494 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 21:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is great, i can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Shadesof Night114 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 00:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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dreat store!!! cant wait to read more!!m please update soon!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 20:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this story about a week and a half ago... and it is REALLY REALLY GOOD! I can't wait to read more update soon! I'll go ahead and email you, but you said you were looking for a new beta?
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Reviewed By: inufanfan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 11:04 EDT
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awwwww update soon...sess is so cute here awwwww oh and will she ever become biffiles with inuyasha, sango,miroku,shippo and kirara? ur a great writer!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: breesasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 23:45 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this Sess/Kag pairing, I'm glad she finally moved on from Inuyasha, he seems like a good guy in this past time but who knows how his mother's death will affect him?
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 15:09 EDT
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Ok I am ready for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: mischievous female [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 12:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww, this chapter was wonderfully sweet! very sweet and informative!
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Reviewed By: bubbles-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 01:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! I love you!!!! I've been keeping up with this story for a long time and when I got an email saying that the story was updated, I was like, "There IS a god!!!" This story is absolutely amazing! I love it and I love where you're going with it! I am starting to really like the Kag/Sess pairing because it's just awesome. But anyways, keep up the good-no, amazing work!!! Ps. Don't you hate it when someone leaves the same review every time? For every fic they're reviewed? But oh well, they like it anyway. ^_^
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 00:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PS: esp why sess is cold, is it a dog demon trait?
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