| "A Surprise Grown" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: SaiyaSith [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2002 21:47 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really wonderful story!!! It's original and unique and all those sorts of things!
I enjoyed it a lot. I hope that you continue writing!
^.^ |
Reviewed By: Mint [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2001 02:25 CST
Comment/Review:
*coughs* Well, despite the uh...interesting story premise, it's quite well written. My only complaint is that your chapters tend to end rather choppily. But that will improve with time. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: majinsk8rvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2001 22:01 CST
Comment/Review:
What the fuck is wrong with all you yaoi writers?! You guys are fucking messed up by writing a fic about two men being a couple and one of them ends up getting pregnant! THat is a diss to the people who worship B/V, G/CC, or G/V (that's gohan and Videl) couple! Dude, man, get your head fixed. |
