| "Black & Blue" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: godie6790 On: June 29, 2005 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaawwwww inu is soooo sweeeeeet! Kagome's is a real bitch if he did that...but hey its ur story...anywho i really like it! plz update soon!!!
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Title: Great story dudette!
Reviewed By: Wind of the Shadows On: June 23, 2005 13:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LIKE IT SOOOOOO MUCH!!!!! P l e a s e keep going, it is good!! Really!! I mean it!! Phew, glad I got that off my chest.
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Reviewed By: Junko On: June 06, 2005 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story and plot, the only critizime i can think to give is to develope the chapters more, you know expand the dialogue and text so that the story gets through more, but other than that the story is great, keep up the good work want to read more
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Reviewed By: Sakouya [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv yur story/fic... i hope u update soon! Im really looking forward to it!
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Title: good
Reviewed By: inuyashatotallyobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 19:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
^_^ good job!
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Title: omg...
Reviewed By: Misstress InuKag On: May 24, 2005 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh wow..i've never read this kind of fanfic..it sounds so scary..though so cool..keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Obvious On: May 24, 2005 16:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
I could tell that this was going to be crappily written from the dumb over-use of question marks in the summary, but I decided to give it a chance. And it sucked. "Geez we all know you love Kagome Inuyasha" is one of the stupidest things you could have had Sango say, and the rest of the dialogue reads just as two-dimensionally. Work on the dialogue.
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: songo10 On: May 23, 2005 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
verrrry hart braking*_* : : : : : :
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Reviewed By: songo10 On: May 23, 2005 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i like inu BUT the storys r goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood Well there u go *_*
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Title: so cool
Reviewed By: kougasmate [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I- I love this... It's so... amazing. I always wondered what her dad was like,and in this story u portray one posible characteristic. I love it, write more!
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Reviewed By: Purple_Pixie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 16:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shanna!!! WHY DID YOU LEAVE IT OFF THERE!!!! I SHALL GET YOU FOR THAT!!!! *laughs like a manic* sorry after you left I got some Arizona Green Tea with Ginsing and Honey and that stuff makes me HYPER!!!! Anyways good chapter! It makes me want to go write more to Dear Diary just for you!
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Reviewed By: Purple_Pixie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.....I'm starting to like this one better than Back Again.....keep up the good work shanna! I really enjoyed it!
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Reviewed By: Skids88 On: May 18, 2005 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was good keep writting and as always have fun.
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Reviewed By: dadada [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 09:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
shanna please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!it is good so far so please!!!!!!!!
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Title: wow...
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2005 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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