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Reviewed By: virginia (mutt) On: November 15, 2006 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude this fic put me on edge 4 real. u really really really need to update cuz u killin me here. pleasepleasepleaseplease write more i'm dying here. I been reading this 4 like a hour. i reread it like 3 times.please write MOREMOREMORE MOREMOREMOREMOREMORE. PLEASEPLEASE. VERYVERYVERYVERY SOON
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Reviewed By: Katari Taisho On: June 15, 2006 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome fic. I hope you update soon!!
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Reviewed By: kisa as u no her lol On: June 08, 2006 13:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAY!! U updated and the chapter is great and i will read it as u keep posting
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Title: pleaseT.T
Reviewed By: dadadada On: May 12, 2006 18:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update...ohh and also im going on the zoo trip...but please updateT.T
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Reviewed By: SailorMoon90225 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 10:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i really like the new chapter!!! plz keep up the good work!! plz update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: dadada [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 12:03 CST
Comment/Review:
onna please update im wanting to read more!! for your friend>.
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Reviewed By: Sky~Angel On: January 24, 2006 04:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story update realy sonn
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Title: UPDATE NOW!!!!!
Reviewed By: inukagpuppylove [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 21:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is awesome! there are only two words for this wonderful story...UPDATE NOW!!!!!!! please and thank you! ^_^
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Reviewed By: just a reader On: January 16, 2006 01:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
you kept emotion high wich keeps people interested you made me angry at her father sad for her and her family the mom tied to the bed thing was a shock and set up further rage towards her dad-i found numerous occation in wich you made a spelling error but only slight ones so i still knew what you were saying-i have actualy never found a story were kagome is beat by here long lost dad and that got you a high originality rateing but you had parts of the story that were verry predictable- your style was none to diferent from other stories i have read but when you threw in the song with the angsty chapter that wasnt to new but it isnt often used.
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Reviewed By: DragonChic [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2005 00:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
great story please update soon
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Reviewed By: icesk8er [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found ur fan fic...i wanted to say happy belated birthday! and i also wanted to tell u i love ur story so far! i'm adding it to my favorites...so that way, i won't lose it!! My birthday is in exactly one week...yup...august 25th...and i'll finally be 15! If u want, u can read my stories...i recommend the latest one...enter Kagome's Mind...it's a one shot...and really cool!! Okay...awesome story...update soon!! ~*Kate*~
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Reviewed By: soledad millions On: August 18, 2005 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS A REALLY GREAT STORY.IT HAS A LOT MORE REALITY TO IT THAN MOST INUYASHA FANFICS THAT I'VE READ.MY ONLY GRIPE IS THAT THE CHAPTERS ARE TOO SHORT.I CAN LIVE WITH THE WRITING AND SPELLING,BUT YOU MIGHT WANT TO TOUCH UP ON THAT FOR ALL THE HATERS OUT THERE.I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT PART.KEEP DOIN' WHAT YOUR DOIN,PEACE.
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Title: Mah say....
Reviewed By: Mae-May On: August 18, 2005 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read ur story so far n' i think is AWESUM ^-^. I hope you're planning to update it sum time. Anyways, i don't think each capter iz short as long as the readers got a point. Keep up the good work=p ps: happi be-lated b-day:P
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Reviewed By: mrw13 On: August 18, 2005 13:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
good story what i don't get is that the doctor and nerses did not freak at the sight of inuyasha did he have a change of choths or what?
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Title: Well....
Reviewed By: darkwolvesoverlord [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 13:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
this was really good, but it was also so scary.... Kagome's dad is being evil. EVIL!!!!!!! lol well anyway, nice story! keep irt up! ^^
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