| "Tokyo Tower" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: HeavenlyKami On: September 18, 2005 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great! This was fantastically and skillfully done. Many have tried to tackle this scene but your method was so original, dark, and somehow refreshing. The simplicitiy of this piece is what makes it so amazing. Thank you so much for a fantastic read.
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Reviewed By: Trench Kamen (Veil Kuro) On: August 08, 2005 02:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting angle on Subaru/Seishirou. I agree with Harmonie on several points.
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Title: Oh yes...
Reviewed By: Sakume Yatana On: April 08, 2005 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yes, yes, yes....this is wonderful, got a wet spot reading it--ahem. Very original, never seen a lemon like this before. On Tokyo Tower. Me likes.
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Title: Tokyo Tower
Reviewed By: Harmonie Des Anges On: July 17, 2004 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic. Very short and highly repetitive, but if you understand anything about writing it's easy to see that the repition is simply a tool used to completely relate Subaru's inner turmoil. A person who is not interested in the more gruesome and twisted aspects of the Subaru/Seishirou relationship is most certainly not going to enjoy this. I find that the simplicity of the story heightened the overall feel. I like the general lack of description of the actual act, concentrating more on the pain Subaru feels as well as his reaction to it. It becomes painfully obvious how much of a puppet in Seishirou's hands Subaru is within the first manga so this reading, a moth to the flame type appeal, is highly likely. Whose to say what happened that night they were locked together. Oh and before I forget to add this, NICE on a lack of commentary of Subaru's own orgasam. Who's to say he even had one? Sure he enjoyed himself in a strange way but it was more that obvious that Seishirou's pleasure came first, further it was less about pleasure and personal fulfillment for Subaru and much more about being dominated and used by this person he cares so much for. I REALLY enjoyed the fic and will most probably be reading and reviewing your other fics as well. I hope the others are as thrilling. Sincerely, HDA
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Reviewed By: kender On: January 13, 2004 15:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kender:*is in a corner crying* That was great. so dark and lust-full...Mal:*dazed and confused*...LokiBu:*smiling all girly and perverted like* I loved it. I'm all for the dark forcfull lovin...
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Reviewed By: Sweetdeily [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 06:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A strangely dark story I find. The wording is magnificent and the character portrayl is in depth, wonderful. It's so dark though, like I should be crying after reading. Or that could be the tradgedy of the series speaking. ~.^ The lemon had a nice throb and ebb to it. You really have a good handle on Personal POV. Wonderful work. |
Reviewed By: clairekygal [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2002 14:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice ficlet ya got here! I've added it to my favorites, and I know I'd keep reading and reviewing if you were to continue it! ^__^ |
Reviewed By: Anata [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2002 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.....I'm not sure if I should cry or not.....--'
This was very good. Sad, good, and wonderful to read.
I loved it. You put this as a prologue....does that mean that you'll continue it? ^-^
Anata |
Reviewed By: Kitana On: August 07, 2002 03:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
... I like this fic.. shibbyness.. XD; (is all speechless) |
Reviewed By: CHAM [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 19:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
O.o Why does this fic make me want to giggle in a fangirl-ish way and cry at the same time? Very good...Poor Subaru...Or should I say, lucky Subaru? |
