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| "Third Chances" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Snow Dragon On: June 02, 2006 16:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the best fic i have ever read! everyone is so in character. I love it! I hope you continue!
| Reviewed By: j0 On: January 25, 2006 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this is good - really good. I enjoy ranma / nabiki a lot, and you write really well. Please keep it up! :>
| Title: Yeah
Reviewed By: JebusOfNazareth [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 15:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, to say true to form on Akane would be wrong. Even if Kou Lon suspects that she is influenced recently. However, The story is fantastic. I really do enjoy the 'odd-pairing' of Ranma/Nabiki. And you write it well. Very well. Not any errors since your beta started. That impresses the English Major in me. As far as suggestions, I can't really say, except I want it to end with Ranma/Nabiki. However you get there is the trick. Perhaps Nabiki needs to employ her wiles on finding out why Akane is acting like she is. That way Kou Lon can present slightly differnet finds, thereby creating a conflict between the merc and elder. Would really make a great chapter if told in flashback.
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