| "To let go" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 22, 2002 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
You used wordpad didn't you? If you use that again, can you please put on wordwrap. I like it. I can see you were having a little bit of trouble with spelling but that is okay, I liked it anyways. All you have to for the gaps is, blah blah blah years later. whala! and could you please write more chapters. I wanna know whats going to happen to Bulma and Vegeta. I am kinda hoping they don't get back together. |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: March 22, 2002 18:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I need a tissue too. ::wipes tears with back of hand:: Why did you have to do it Bulma? Why? Look what you have done. I am okay. ::starts sobbing again:: Like I said, I am okay. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: kim On: February 03, 2002 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic. I wonder what will happen in the next part of the party. Keep going. Please! |
Reviewed By: cosmicgoku On: February 02, 2002 14:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you gonna make Vegeta and Bulma get back together (sniff) It's so sad but really good please continue |
Reviewed By: Me On: January 31, 2002 05:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I loved your fan fic, I Just hope Vegeta and Bulma DON'T get back together his much better off with out her so could you please try not to get them together again.By the way I think that putting F. Trunks in the story would make your fan fic even better. |
Reviewed By: cosmicgoku On: January 11, 2002 19:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How could you end it there it was so good please put up the next chapter soon peace. |
Reviewed By: danieloflorien [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2001 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is a good story and while I've read others that are much the same this one is still good |
Reviewed By: claire On: December 04, 2001 17:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OO pease oo please finish the story! How can you leave us hanging like that! Well...Please write more i love your story! |
Reviewed By: majinsk8rvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2001 09:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cool, but u should at least keep us entertained!!
I really enjoyed reading it! |
