| "A Continuation Gone Too Far" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: Anaxim On: May 20, 2005 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue this, its so hard to find original work such as this
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Reviewed By: Rubel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 05:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool. Good Story, interesting setup. I hope to see more. I'm looking forward to the Usagi/Mamoru confrontation. Is Ranma going to be the king of earth? I mean Red hair plus Blonde hair does make pink... Anyways thanks for the good read and please keep up the good work.
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Title: Chapter one
Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 00:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good stuff. I enjoyed this chapter muchly. I think you might have one more chapter in you, at least the direct outcome of what you've set in motion in this one. I can understand not wanting to go beyond that, it can be a never-ending task. Thanks for the read.
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