| "Touch" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: You got it backwards
Reviewed By: comphottie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 20:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
K, I know you don't know any of this stuff, but i just want to tell you. Yuki is afraid of Akito. Yes, Akito is bigger, and he definately would be the one in control of the situation. Yuki would be the one stunned into motionlessness. Anyway, it was really good.
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Title: tHIS WAS VERY GOOD!!
Reviewed By: Ayumu Leingod [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 19:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS WAS SO TOTALLY COOL!!! YOU REALLY NEED TO WRITE MORE!!! I READ YOUR BEYBLADE FANFICS THEY WERE SO FUNNY!!! I LOVED THEM!! I'M GONNA PUT YOU ON MY FAVORITES!! REMEMBER WRITE MORE!! OH AND YOU NEED TO POST YOUR iNU FIC. YOU KNOW HTE ONE WERE YOU CLAIM SESSHOMARU!!!!!! OH I ALSO READ THE SERVIOR INU STLYE. IT WAS FUNNY BUT YOU COULD WORK ON IT!! BYE BYE WRITE MORE!!
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Title: REVIEW OF A FANFIC VEIWER
Reviewed By: Ayumu Leingod [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was pretty naughty. your spelling was pretty good but you could do better. If you fix your spelling it would be really good. Akito was really ooc but you kinda got Yuki right. You could be a really good fanfic writer. write more soon!!! even if it was supossed to stop there don't i want to know what happens.
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