| "Kagome takes a bath" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: WinterSolstice1990 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 14:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
im not trying to flame you but this was very ill written. there were so many spelling and gramtical errors that it was distracting. it is extremly rushed and the dialogue is embarrasing. you need to do alot of editing before a story is good enough to be read. there was no development & it is lacking descriptiveness. it came across as amatuer prematurly posted. im sorry if this appeared to you as a flame, it was not my intention. this is my first review for a fic that i think is bad and i did my best to give constructive criticism rather than offend.
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Title: Kagome Takes A Bath
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 00:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: inusho [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 03:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet. Your story was sweet. Good job. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 22:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
weeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!! that's all I have to say. too bad it's a one shot. cuz didn't you say that Kags wuz in heat? that'd make her now pregnant right? k, ja!
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