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| "To Remember" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: kato-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 21:35 CDT
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Wow, I have followed this arc for a long time. I never thought I'd like Anubisu and Ryou as a couple but you've made me a believer :) I hope you continue on with this storyline. It's just bloody amazing!
| Reviewed By: Split Persona-The Ones and Onlies [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 17:42 CDT
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Okay, we like these past two chapters, definitely something going on. Xiu was kinda jaded though when he was talking to his father. It shows how the war actually affected him. Questions? What questions? Oh, you mean the ones that we have to ask with every review? Don't worry, we don't want you to answer all of them, just let us know that you are going to mix them in with the story. We believe in asking questions to motivate inspiration rather than only tossing out ideas. We like how Ryou is moving on past everything that happened to him in his past. But now that he's suddenly remembering things about Anubis... Ooooh... Will Michael be popping up frequently in this story? And will Seiji be bit by the jealousy bug? We hope so. *hint*hint* Okay, we will be waiting paitiently for the next chapter. Everybody at Seiji's! YAY!!
| Reviewed By: SplitPersona On: June 09, 2005 11:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Normally, JC and I would review, but since we don't have enough letters, I just tell you how much we love this story. FFNet is not agreeing with us. This story is just great though. Poor Anubisu. I think that Rajura needs to be more honest with his brothers. If something were to go down, they should have a heads up. Although, them walking into it blind does make for better drama. ^_^ Seiji better keep his eyes open. And Ryou, poor Ryou. Things really need to pick up in his life. Like Anubisu picking him up and them running away together. ^_^ Now, you also need to replace Chapter 4. We read it on FFNet, but here it seems like you put a chapter of one of your Petshop of Horror fics. That will really throw people off. Anyway, we can't wait for the next chapter. Anymore Xiu/Seiji-ness on the way too? *hint*hint*
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