| "Impossible!" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: eternal17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2006 14:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Its me again!:)I think you´re pretty good writer please continue updating
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Reviewed By: eternal17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 14:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I locve you fanfic, its interesting and funny, so please please please continue writing
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Title: chibi-alchemy-girl
Reviewed By: chibi-alchemy-girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 13:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is very kawaii!! *squee* if i didn't know any better, i would think i was reading the actual manga it self! it's so real like! very, very good job! can't wait to read the next part!
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Reviewed By: kiki14 On: June 22, 2005 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Had there been an eleven on the scale from 1-10 for enjoyment, I would have gladly submitted it. Unfortunately the wasn't. Also I would like to thank you for updating, even if I am upset you'll be away for ten days. Just don't forget me back here k? I really loved how Winry suddenly decided to become an automail maker/repairer just for Ed. I always wondered why she never became a doctor like her parents. I would bet this is the reason even in the actual anime and manga. ^_^ I was happy to see another person reviewed, I myself began to get worried that I would be the only one taking time to review. But I have to say you deserve it. Please update as soon as you get back! Toodles!
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Title: please continue
Reviewed By: hmmmm..... On: June 22, 2005 00:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was just a relay great fanfiction. I realy enjoyed it alot!!! I hope that u continue it, because it already has me hooked and there was only one chapter. Trust me that is sayin alot!! so please continue ur story i would love to keep reading what u write.
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Reviewed By: kiki14 On: June 21, 2005 12:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of course I enjoyed it! I enjoyed it just as much as I enjoyed all your other fan fics! How couldn't I? I am still shocked that I seem to be one of the only people reviewing Impossible and Changes... what's wrong with the people reading fan fics today? Anyhow, I really liked how you had a little bit of fluff at the end. Somethings going on! I do hope you update soon, even if (once again) it's just for me, I hope you continue writing! You really are good, people just don't like to review. *shrug and sigh* Toodles!
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Reviewed By: kiki14 On: June 20, 2005 18:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmmm... I'm surprised no one reviewed. I have only recently stumbled upon your fan fics so you must forgive me for not reviewing sooner. I have enjoyed it so far but I am afraid you have stopped updating. I should hope you continue to write this fan fic, even if it's just for me... usually I don't read fan fics about younger selves of the characters of Full Metal Alchemist, but I have read one or two of your other stories and couldn't resist you know? I just knew this would be just as good as the other's, and lookey there I was correct! ^_^ Anyway, i am looking forward to your upcoming chapters, should you decide to continue this fan fic. Hopefully you will! Thanks in advance! Toodles!
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