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Title: hi again!
Reviewed By: RayWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe! Can't wait till next chapter like always! I'm so sorry for Tenpo ;-; my grandma's dog died monday ;-; but she was like 19 years old in human so, she was pretty old -_-; anyway. poor haku! X3
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Title: Uh, I Screwed Up
Reviewed By: Choi-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The actual ratings... Tada!
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Title: This Is Kind of Cool!
Reviewed By: Choi-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 00:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm, I'm not sure what to write. (I've totally fried my brain trying to write fanfiction. e__e?) Everything is good, but the real selling point is probably plot. I mean, wow: It's cute, a little PWP-ish, and it makes perfect sense! Plus, the yaoi-less Haku thing is very refreshing, even though I like yaoi just fine. Like RayWolf said, I don't know why no one reviews this. It's one the coolest little stories I've come across lately. Good job! ^__^b
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Title: back again!
Reviewed By: RayWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 08:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! sorry it took me so long to read this, but my internet has been acting weird and something with this website makes it not be able to refresh or somethin. Anyway, THANK YOU for the thanks in the 4th chapter!. Sorry to give your hopes up thinking that i was actually someone else revieeing ^^; Keep the work up! =D
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: RayWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 03:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI AGAIN! I love your new chapter! thank goodness no yaoi, I'm not a fan of it AT ALL. Anyway, I have some ideas for the new chapter! maybe he could try out for several jobs then when he does get one, he sees Zabuza or somethin. X3 Anyway, that's just me X3...people have to review more...
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Title: O.o a TITLE *insert title here*
Reviewed By: RayWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 06:05 CDT
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Hello! I can't beleive there isn't any reveiws on your story! I love your story! It's funny and it's not with any yaoi or anything...I don't really like yaoi and that stuff. Anyway, yah! Can't wait to read the next chapter! X3
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