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| "Swordian" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: galing ah!
Reviewed By: ako^^ On: May 27, 2005 21:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
it's a new fic! im kinda familiar with the words swordian knight/sorcerer (better read the sacred pentacle!!)... the intro was funny and makes us readers more fascinated with how the story will go. keep the story workin'! you have that creativity surging out of you! hehe...
| Title: Hey, It's really interesting!
Reviewed By: RayGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 06:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very interesting first chapter! When I began reading I almost gave up because being the simple-minded person I am, big words scare me. After Ether began writing thouhg I knew this was a story for me! Please update soon! Style of Writing: 9 The story is wonderfully written but in the beginning of the story the word Swordian was sued many times, though it may have been necassary. In everything else you recieved a 10 from me! You are a very creative and talented author! I completely enjoyed this story as well! (No grammer or spelling mistakes, yay!) I hope to see more soon! (Did you get 'Ptolemy' from Cleopatra? Stupid qusetion but who knows?)
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