| "Hiei's Other Sister" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2009 02:55 CST
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I thought Kouga's father was dead
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Title: Is Hiei gonna be protective?
Reviewed By: Shikon Kunoichi-Shiko Crystal (but you can call me Sapphire that's my real name Crystal or Crys is mt second name) On: February 09, 2009 03:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Isn't ive of Yukina? Then doesn't that mean he should be protective with Kagz too? If so then Koga should be beaten to a bloody pulp by Hiei in the next chappie cause you can't make someone your mate without asking their family members first is it gonna be like that? Again I vote Kagome/Kurama/Youko *grins* I really like that pairing can't wait for your update!
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Title: UPDATE!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Shikon Kunoichi-Shiko Crystal On: February 09, 2009 03:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooh! I REALLY LIVE THIS! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! OH! and I vote for Kagome/Kurama, Hiei/Sango, Yukina/Kazuma, Shippou/Rin, Seshomaru/Shizuru and Botan/Koenma oh yeah! Miroku should be with some random OOC. Please update I REALLY LOVE THIS! can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 05:56 CST
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this is a good story so far. i think it's going to be great watching yusuke go nuts over all the guys around kagome and when hiei realizes that since he and kagome have the same father that makes her his sister as well we'll get to see him go nuts as well after all hiei is extremely protective of yukina why would he be any less protective of kagome
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Reviewed By: Jaisa Rael [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2008 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome/Sesshomaru/Karama Sango/Hei Rin/Koenma Ykina/Kouga Boton/Yuske
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Reviewed By: knjj727 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 06:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really really good i pray that this is up dated as soon as possible pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese and if any one dares give this fic a flame thell have to deal with me and my 20+ cousins cause that like it as well oh i was reading out loud sorry ...anqunnet said to up date asap as well as the others and thell be looking out for future up dates i will to so un less you want a lot of dissapointed people please please pleaze please please please please up date soon
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Reviewed By: knjj727 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 13:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
face a slow and pain full death if you dont up date soon ^_^ j/k but please up date soon im waisting away here
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Reviewed By: Icywolfflame(not in) On: February 18, 2007 22:11 CST
Comment/Review:
O.O This is really KOOL!!! I hope you can update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: bluemoon_175 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 12:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait to read more so I hope you update as soon as you can. :^)
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Reviewed By: Kellybug [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 18:36 CST
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I've always liked the pairing of Shizuru and Hiei :) If for no other reason than it's a perfect counter-balance to Kuwabara and Yukina! Also.. they seem the perfect match ;) Both seem to be loners, and very watchful when it comes to their siblings! And, I LOVED how Kagome was able to spook both Kurama and Youko! :)
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 18:04 CST
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MIROKU-?? what about that girl that miroku preposes to when she was a child.
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 18:00 CST
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It seems their dad wanted them to meet. Kagome and Hiei I mean. BOTON- Koenma, RIN- Shippo, YUKINA- Kuwabara, SANGO- Hiei, Kuronue -KAGOME- Kurama(youko/shuuichi), SESSHOMARU- Shizuru, KOENMA- Boton, YUSUKE- Keiko, KOUGA- Ayame, MIROKU- the story seems to be missing stuff.. like how sesshoumaru got to the point of eatting ramon from kagome. What lead up to the kissing reward. what got kagome bringing yukina and shizuru to the past.
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Reviewed By: Lunarwolfdemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 17:36 CST
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Please update!I'm laughing hard from the new chapter realy please update ASAP.
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Reviewed By: Lunarwolfdemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 08:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update!Man this is so funny.I couldn't stop laughing!Please update ASAP!
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Reviewed By: This Sayuri-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 22:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really really good but you need to make the chappies MUCH MUCH longer.
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