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| "Hiei's Other Sister" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Title: Yay!!! Don't want to log in Name: Kaggy-chan2202
Reviewed By: Nicky#2202 On: June 16, 2005 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic!!! Oh ok I'll tell you the Parings Kagome/Kurama/Youko Kagome deserves better!!! She shouldn't have to endor the pain and suffering she ahd when with Inu so I believe that she needs someone who will love her for who she is not who she looks like!!! that is why I feel that Youko and Kurama would make Kagome happy thus a perfect match!!! Yusuke/Keiko Kurawabara/Nobody cause i think he is an idiot. Inuyasha/Yukina cause I think he should have someone he can't mistake for a former love cause sry to say it but our little hanyou is a little dense...Koenma/Boton Hiei/Sango They are so cute together!!! Miroku/Nobody cause he is a dirty perv.Kikyo/Nobody cause I hate her!!!! Die Die Die!!!! Sry!!! Please keep up the excellent work and sry if you are a Kurabaka, Miroku, or Kikyo Lover But I don't really like them...sry that is what I think and nothing can change my mind cause this fic Rox!!!!!! P.S. Kikyo should rot in hell!!!
| Reviewed By: FEMALE_INUYASHA [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 09:50 CDT
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Oh and i really like Kuramas gurl's character she has her raeally planed out and she would be perfect for Koeama or someone else! just saying i agree that you should use her!
| Title: review and pairings
Reviewed By: FEMALE_INUYASHA [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 09:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok i love your story. Yukina should be with Sesshomaru they would make a good couple. Kagome and Kurama of corse fox boy fox girl perfect. sango hiei. Rin and Yuskie who better to protect her than him. Koga and Botan perfect she'd brighten up his day. I don't know about the others. i feel for who ever you put kawabara with.
| Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 09:45 CDT
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first, good chappie, seccond, Kuwabara's sister's name is spelled Shizuru, and third, character for Hiei, use if you feel like it: Name: Mujitsu, Hair: very light blue, almost silver, waist length almost always pulled into either a high pony tail or some form of braid(s), eyes: soft lilac, height: 4'7" (kinda short I know), age: 371(Hiei's like 500, so...), demon: wind, angel-like lilac wings other info: very filled out body, but hard to see with the large shirts that she wears which usually cover her but, almost long enough to be a dress, never shows her legs because of various scars she recieved when she was younger from protecting her little brother (died from bleeding to death), never wears shoes unless necessary (she likes to feel the earth beneath her feet), very kind and helpful, always speaks her mind and shows every emotion. Usually happy, not easily angered but deadly when she is angered, not good to be left alone when sad, she may try to harm herself, or slip into depression. Usually not serious in battle, keeps on the carefree look unless either 1: her life is in danger, 2: someone she loves is in danger, or 3: she's angered which her eyes turn a milky white color and looses control (which doesn't happen very often) if there's anything else you'd like to know, feel free to ask, use her if you feel like it, if you don't want to, that's ok. update soon, and ja!
| Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 16:43 CDT
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good fic, I'm pretty sure that Yukina and Hiei are twins, but don't quote me on it. update soon please
| Reviewed By: Moonpelt On: May 31, 2005 20:00 CDT
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I'm totaly confused! Which means you have some serious explaing to do in the next chapter! Get it? Got it? Good! Update soon!
| Title: whoa
Reviewed By: bwlj - bookwormloverjen On: May 25, 2005 18:45 CDT
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this is good, plz keep up the good work, pretty plz
| Reviewed By: Shadow15(not logged on) On: May 25, 2005 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That cliffy was so mean! can you please update soon?? Please!!
| Reviewed By: blackshadowz (not logged in) On: May 25, 2005 16:06 CDT
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interesting... i really do like the second chapter.. it seems to be moving along quite nicely and i cant wait to see just what you have in store for us next.
| Title: REVIEW
Reviewed By: hi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 12:00 CDT
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ABSOULTY LOVING IT HURRY AND UPDATE I'LL BE WAITING AND EXPECTING YOU TO DO SO VERY SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| Title: neat
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 12:46 CDT
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its shippo and yukina is hiei's twin sister... i really dont know how but its cool... anyway this is good plz continue it plz plz plz plz with a cherry on top? ^_^
| Reviewed By: Hiya!!! On: May 23, 2005 09:57 CDT
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I like the story so far but could you make it a little longer?
| Reviewed By: blackshadowz (not logged in) On: May 22, 2005 13:45 CDT
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I dont know about this fic of yours. Your prologue lacks detail. It seems to me that all you give us are facts with no substance. Along with that is the fact that the prologue is too short, for my tastes at least, and it could have been longer . Its just not as eye catching as it could be
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