| "YuGiOh goes to Hogwarts!" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: animaster_sonja [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 19:42 CDT
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Shamona- I think It'll be the other way around. Malfoy will have the hard time. Marik will try to steal his stuff while he's trying to make Seto help him to prank Yugi. ROTFLMAO.
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Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Never mind the semi-flame... It's fun even with a lot of typos..." - It's called constructive criticism, y'know, that stuff that people write to try to help the author write better? Ever heard of it?....... Anyways, this was REALLY an improvement! I'm glad you're taking my advice, because your fic is REALLY getting better :D I still saw some tense problems here and there, but you got Marik's name right, and overall, your tense usage is definitely getting better. I can't wait until the Sorting Ceremony - I've got a ballpark idea about where everybody's gonna go ;). Well, keep up the improvement - I'm proud of you :D
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Reviewed By: ShamonaCeline [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 14:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAHOO!!! YES! I want to see what happens next! Oh and make seto & Malik to Slytherin, it would be a living hell for them with Malfoy! XD MWUHAHAHAHAHAHA! Anyways, please update!
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Reviewed By: animaster_sonja [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Never mind the semi-flame... It's fun even with a lot of typos...
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Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm... I don't mean to sound rude or anything, but I think everybody over-rated this by giving it 10s (except the enjoyment factor, because that's more of a personal thing). Don't get me wrong - I still like the idea, but there's a few things that caught my attention. First of all, it's Marik, not Marick. Second, I think you should study up on verb tenses. For example, try to stick with either present (example: Yugi discovers a letter from Hogwarts and opens it.) or past (example: Yugi discovered a letter from Hogwarts and opened it.) Those are the main things I noticed. Other than that, this is a great story idea. Please don't take this review as a flame - I'm just trying to offer you constructive criticism :) So update soon, I want to see what happens!
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Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it i'v bin reading it for sometime now and I love it keep up the ggod worlk!
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Reviewed By: ShamonaCeline [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 20:26 CDT
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Hey! it doesn't suck! I liked the chapter! So plase continue! I kinda love it already!
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Reviewed By: ShamonaCeline [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so desperate about this now...PLEASE UPDATE! I want to see when Harry, Hermione, and Ron get to meet them.
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Reviewed By: ShamonaCeline [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 13:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOAH! SETO GOT A LOT OF MONEY!!! JOEY'S RIGHT! SETO IS MONEYBAGS! *day dreams while drooling* I want those money...*snaps out of it* anyways, PLEASE CONTINUE!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Nakazato [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 14:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
keep writing
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Reviewed By: ShamonaCeline [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh! everything's good good GOOD! please keep on going!
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Reviewed By: ShamonaCeline [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is going to be sweet! Joey calling seto slimy snot and Seto calling Joey, mutt! WAHOO! PLEASE UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Darkrose 17 On: May 24, 2005 19:17 CDT
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It's Care of Magical Creatures, just so ya know. This looks like a promising fanfiction.
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Reviewed By: unkown friend On: May 23, 2005 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woah! CON-tinue! it's so cool! update!
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Reviewed By: Wolfshadow86 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, i like yugioh and harry potter and no 1 has done this before it rulues!!!!!!!!!
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