| "YuGiOh goes to Hogwarts!" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: Blue Wolf Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2009 17:56 CST
Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOO, YOU CAN'T JUST STOP THERE! UPDATE ASAP!
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Reviewed By: Moon Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 10:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE CONTINUE NOW!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: magerm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 20:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
More! More! More! *bangs fist against table* Anyway, UPDATE!!! And a good idea might be showing us a couple things about the enemy...
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Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well...sorry about the low Spelling & Grammar rating, but the whole tensing problem didn't improve - it just got worse. Maybe you should update less often so you can work on editing your chapters after they're written and stuff, because it might help some. Or you could find an editor to edit the tensing problems out... But don't get me wrong, I still have faith in this fic - just try to work on the tense problem. Other than that, I enjoyed this chapter ^__^
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Reviewed By: ShamonaCeline [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You do know, you updated 2 chapters, anyhow, please update! I want to see how Joey the Pup do this thing
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Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still don't understand why my constructive critisism reviews are getting called flames... Eh, well. Anyways, your tense issue is definitely still improving, just keep trying to work hard at it, okay? ^__^ And I knew Kaiba would go to Ravenclaw - I just knew it =] Cya
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Title: Animasters chat
Reviewed By: animaster_sonja [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 11:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
(Jake,Sonja,Damien,Midori,Jett,Erik,Kotako,Evan): WE WANT MORE!!!!!! UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ShamonaCeline [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't listen to those flames! listen to good comments! Continue Yugioh goinh to Hogwarts! Stick to that!
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Reviewed By: tirajm [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 11:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
-_- Not bad, but it lacks the humorous tone the original Harry Potter books are famous for. Prety good for a first try. Tip: Reread the Harry Potter books, and get your hands on Yuugioh manga. Just reveiw some of the character traits, so they seem more like the origianls.
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Reviewed By: animaster_sonja [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 19:42 CDT
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Shamona- I think It'll be the other way around. Malfoy will have the hard time. Marik will try to steal his stuff while he's trying to make Seto help him to prank Yugi. ROTFLMAO.
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Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Never mind the semi-flame... It's fun even with a lot of typos..." - It's called constructive criticism, y'know, that stuff that people write to try to help the author write better? Ever heard of it?....... Anyways, this was REALLY an improvement! I'm glad you're taking my advice, because your fic is REALLY getting better :D I still saw some tense problems here and there, but you got Marik's name right, and overall, your tense usage is definitely getting better. I can't wait until the Sorting Ceremony - I've got a ballpark idea about where everybody's gonna go ;). Well, keep up the improvement - I'm proud of you :D
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Reviewed By: ShamonaCeline [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 14:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAHOO!!! YES! I want to see what happens next! Oh and make seto & Malik to Slytherin, it would be a living hell for them with Malfoy! XD MWUHAHAHAHAHAHA! Anyways, please update!
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Reviewed By: animaster_sonja [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Never mind the semi-flame... It's fun even with a lot of typos...
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Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm... I don't mean to sound rude or anything, but I think everybody over-rated this by giving it 10s (except the enjoyment factor, because that's more of a personal thing). Don't get me wrong - I still like the idea, but there's a few things that caught my attention. First of all, it's Marik, not Marick. Second, I think you should study up on verb tenses. For example, try to stick with either present (example: Yugi discovers a letter from Hogwarts and opens it.) or past (example: Yugi discovered a letter from Hogwarts and opened it.) Those are the main things I noticed. Other than that, this is a great story idea. Please don't take this review as a flame - I'm just trying to offer you constructive criticism :) So update soon, I want to see what happens!
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Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it i'v bin reading it for sometime now and I love it keep up the ggod worlk!
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