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| "Memory" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: DarkDemonHuntress [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep going with it!!! i want sesshomaru and rin to have some sparks fly and have him say the reason he was mad at her is besucz he thought he would loose her.....u decide, but please keep going!!
| Title: omg
Reviewed By: Raygirl (not logged in) On: June 02, 2005 20:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
omg this rocks!!! Keep it going pweaze!!! For me?
| Title: Loved it! Nicely written!
Reviewed By: Just an honest Reviewer! On: May 25, 2005 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, I loved this story, or one-shot, and hope very much that it will be continued. You are a very talented author and have a great sense of perspective and detail. Stle of Writing: 9. You wrote beautifully but need to try and use paragraphs. This will help make your story look more attractive to readers. In everything else you received a 10 because you had no grammer or spelling mistakes, you were very creative in your writing, I completely enjoyed your story, and I thought it was a wonderful tribute to mediaminer.org and I hope to see it continued!
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