| "Half-Breed Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 22:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
3-month (and counting) cliffhangers are totally uncool, dude.
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Title: AWSOME!!
Reviewed By: DeathChildInuLover666 On: May 25, 2005 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Like your story so far its very interesting. I love "Slave" storys!! I cant wait to see whats going to happen next! Your spelling is ok i understand that its not easy to spell things correctly when your typing.. HELL i mess up all the time and spell things horrible when i write Inuyasha fan fictions... But anyways GREAT JOB! And i'll definatly come back to check on this story so UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Akibozu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh, a cliffhanger! I admit, the grammar did confuse me a bit, but I like where you're going with this story. I'll be sure to read next time you update.
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