"Battle Cry" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Uniasus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 16:59 CST Comment/Review: I love the story line, but your grammer and sentence structure could use a little work. Most importantly, don't stop! You should finish a whole story to see how you progress and how you can improve.
| Reviewed By: shoureijuu On: October 24, 2005 16:04 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10 Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review: Please get a Beta reader. It's a very sudden story, the idea is interesting, but at the same time it really lacks foundation. Keep working on your writing. :)
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