| "His Reasons to Live" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: kit-kit12 On: December 14, 2006 15:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aawww this chapter is so sweet and i never doubted for a second that yusuke would be able to keep his promise
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Title: Oh Yeah!
Reviewed By: Nefra Jaxxia On: December 13, 2006 08:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great come back for this chapter! I've been waitin for like forever. Leave it to Yusuke to provoke Hiei at any hour of the day. The dance was perfect. Yusuke's entrance was to die for. He promised his little girl a dance and she got it. Hope you update again soon! Ja ne! Nefra
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Reviewed By: Nefra aka Jaxxia7 On: June 20, 2006 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it! I have to say, the scene with Genkai was funny as hell. I'd like to see a few more like that. Hope you update again soon. Ja ne! Nefra
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2006 06:45 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a very cool and creative story. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 18:36 CST
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hm... lots unsespected surprises. All very pleasant, but I have to wonder who is Hakuya's dad? I think its rather amusing that Shizuru & Kagome werent getting along. Also the fact that Fluffy got jealous cuz Jakotsu was hitting on Yusuke lol hm.. cant wait to see whatll happen next. Update soon please ^-^
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Reviewed By: WhiteRose Kurama On: January 09, 2006 21:26 CST
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Well it's so good to hear from U again! I was beginning to think that U forgot all about this fic! Anyway this was a great chappie and I didn't expect Shizuru or Genkai to show up at all. Anyway, I assume that they know about Yusuke's situation? And I was wondering, is Keiko really the twins' mother cuz Nefertiri has blue eyes like Kagome's, right? And I assume that Kagome is Hakuya's mom cuz she has miko powers like Kagome? And is Sess really her father or is Inuyasha the father? I'm curious about this, so if U can answer these questions that'd be great! Keep up the amazing work and hurry w/ the next chappie:P
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Reviewed By: Daze [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 00:39 CDT
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YAY!!! another update!!! keep up the good work!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 16:37 CDT
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UHH!!!! NO!!! DONT STOP THERE!! PLEASE!!! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT IS GONNA HAPPEN TO YUSUKE!! I know him & Kirara would be fine anyways... but then Kurama Hiei & Kuwabara would get suspicious. AND what about the system? Did he save it? AND lastly who is Hakuyas mom? Are Sess Yusuke& Kag together? cuz thatd be an awesome pairing. UPDATE SOON!!!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Nefra aka Jaxxia7 On: September 25, 2005 06:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The spelling mistakes didn't bother me a bit. They sure didn't take away from the chapters at all. I am so loving this and hope you update soon. Gotta see what happens to Yusuke. Ja ne! Nefra
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Title: AnimeJunki07
Reviewed By: Kags On: August 18, 2005 00:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY...and i cant wait to see what you have coming up next. This story is one of the best Yu Yu Hakusho cross overs I've read...but what happened to Inuyasha...or are you not going to have Inuyasha in the story. Well i can't wait until you update so i hope it's soon...oh and good luck on your finals if you haven't already taken them...if you have then i hope you did well on them. I'm currently not logged in but my sn is AnimeJunki07
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Reviewed By: WhiteRose-Kurama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 18:50 CDT
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I think I already read this chappie B4! So what gives? I hope you have a new chappie up your sleeve somewhere (unless you're wearing a sleeveless shirt then this threat doesn't work) *preparing a very point weapon to be used to poke you with* Keep in mind that I'm really not a violent person, honest. *smiling way too sweetly, imagine the chesire cat from Alice in Wonderland grinning* Well keep up the good work and hurry w/ the next chappie :P
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: July 11, 2005 13:23 CDT
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WOW i love it it is just soooooo great i dont know what to say but i cant wait to see what happends between Hiei, Kurama, and Yusuke so update it really soon ok thanks tootles.
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Title: keep writing!!
Reviewed By: kendra On: June 10, 2005 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved the story and i only read 2 chapters!! write more pleazzzzz.
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed (not logged in) On: May 29, 2005 00:27 CDT
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OMG! so Kagome is their mom. But then why would Yusuke lie to Genkai? So this is gonna be a crossover then? YAY! my fave! Cant wait for the next chappy! Update Soon!
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: May 27, 2005 00:27 CDT
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OMG is Kagome Susa and Nefertiri's mom? Well if she is then YAAAAAAAAAA i love it and i cant wait to see what happends next so you have got to update it really soon ok thanks tootles. ~Ris~
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