| "My Daddy Died A Hero" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: *cries*
Reviewed By: Natnee On: June 06, 2005 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! Its so sad!!!! I really like it though!!!! I like it a lot! You know all those ppl who gave u flames/bad reviews? BASTARDOS!!!!!!!!!!! U dont listen to them kk hun! U write fanfics coz u can and your good at it! FANFIC PRIDE!!!
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Title: Very nice!
Reviewed By: Theforgottenone [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done. I'm sorry people have to be so cruel, please don't leave. I read your profile. Please don't... you do have fans and you shouldn't care if me and that other girl are your only fans here, we want you to keep it up and update whenever you can. Please don't leave us, that would be very bad if you left us. I love your fanfictions.. both of them reguardless what nyone else says. I beg of you not to leave. Please.
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Title: SNJSJ
Reviewed By: The_Dark_Black_Neko On: May 24, 2005 18:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
i didn't enjoy it that much... im not one fr critisizm but they ALL are soooo right... exspt NicoleChrissmanluvsya she is like so wrong but CHANGE YOUR STORY OR TAKE IT OFF!!!
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Title: TO MRS.OMG
Reviewed By: ShyloneIsAllurs On: May 24, 2005 18:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
We have our reasons! I mean why write if you can't like one of the others said! ui mean COME ON!!! DON'T BE RETRDED 1!!!
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: NicoleChrissmanluvsya On: May 24, 2005 18:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
You guys are so mean! Why do you have to be mean to her. Don't listen to them. Im waiting for my screen name thing to get set up but don't listen to them. I luv ur fan fiction! Jamie please don't leave us because of them. (got ur name from profile)
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Title: UM...SORRY BUT UR FAN FIC ISSS....
Reviewed By: I_loveKira_love On: May 24, 2005 18:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
I DON'T LIKE IT SO I A GREE WITH EVERYONE UP THERE... UR FAN FICTION WAS POSTED TODAY AND WE JUST DON'T LIKE IT. WHY DO YOU WRIGHT IF YOU CSN'T? I MEAN YOU CAN'T EVEN SPELL.
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Title: hi you people
Reviewed By: Thephone_gurl On: May 24, 2005 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow dude... that was sad but it could have been diffrent. You could have used diffrent characters and u didn't have to make it so overly dramatic. I hate those kind of stories so you should change it because i don't like it. SO XCHANGE IT NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOW DAMN IT!!!!!!!!!!!! GOD!!
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Title: U STINK
Reviewed By: 12312FireKuroomi12312 On: May 24, 2005 18:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Dude, it cold hav been bettr. i mean i sdidn;'t liker it and i don't think anyone else enjoyed it either. ia gree with Rachel The Obvious... you do need yo "JUNK" to be in a diffrent site. thank you and dont even update again! you have no f ans!
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Title: finish damn it!
Reviewed By: xxToxxHotxxForxxYouxx On: May 24, 2005 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
finish your damn story!!! why am i even reading it if your not going to finish it! i don't know about you but you need to finish it or you'll lose fans!
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Title: BLA!!
Reviewed By: Rachel The Obvious On: May 24, 2005 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
You fan fiction was horrible, I didn't like it at all. You need a hobby and a diffrent plce to post your "JUNK" cause really, no one wants to read it.
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