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| "Rage" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: ChaosRune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 19:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, this fanfic is great, but I really hope that you kill Akane, or at least make her a Ronin, her actions, even if they are the result of something the Amazon did, its not excuse for her behavior before the wedding, so I really hope you dont use the excuse "oh, it was all the Amazon fault, so Akane is innocent and she can do whatever she wants"
| Reviewed By: Athenaise On: May 29, 2005 12:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would say please kill Akane, but that is my dislike for her, but I like the storie... best bet would be ronin for her, but with Nabiki not able to help her for long and Ranma getting a girl that is loving... and not a Tendo. By all the girls Genma engaged Ranma to that has to be one for him.
| Title: That's rough
Reviewed By: Neon Ronin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 20:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
One word... DAMN. There had better be a damn good explanation as to why Akane has donned the ungrateful bitch identity, especially after Ranma saved her life at Phoenix Mountain. Even before this she obviously had some feelings for him; sure they'd fight, but there was always some scene where she'd be worried about his safety. Now she doesn't bat an eye when they find Ranma cutting himself? I'm sorry, but that seems, to me, to be OOC beyond anything else I've read in fanfics of this sort. I think she needs some sense slapped into her, preferably with her own mallet. Frankly, Nodoka was perfectly justified in doing what she did- and I'm just surprised that Akane seemed relieved at first; after all the things he's done for her, you'd think she'd be shocked or protest the dissolution of the engagement. I only hope that once she realizes what she's done to him that she'll be begging his forgiveness.
| Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 07:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've seen this fic over at ff.net and I like there and I like it here too. I just hope you'll update it someday.
| Reviewed By: hentairoses On: May 24, 2005 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't take this the wrong way, but I've read a lot of fics that go about people who suffer from rage. Every thing from medical to being cuase by ki. I'm courious to see what going to happen consider ranma a cutter and that akane suffer form the rage, but what people are going to do to help not only ranma but also akane. I mean not the usual it all akane fualt, but that everybody might have contributed or allowed to go on to long in way or another. It kind of like the p-chan thing considered taht most people try to put all the blame on ryoga but it kind of falls on everybody mostly three people. Anyway I leave that to you considerering this a fanfic not the manga anyway.
| Reviewed By: NiceGirl On: May 24, 2005 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feelbadfor Ranma. Akane was being very mean. When you have the chance plez update this. Tell us how Akane feels about this. Let Ranma become better and kick Akane's ass while breaking her heart. Let her feel his pain and whant him back and let he rejected her as she did him.
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