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| "Sausages, It was a Tuesday" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: digger [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2006 02:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude finish this thing man. the omake are fucking hillarious. i have also enjoyed doctor's orders and the emperor's new angst. i would love to see more of all three fics. update update update update update
| Reviewed By: yenom [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 18:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Others may not like the thought of Ritsuko X Shinji. However, I feel that it has potential, especially with the twist of revenge on Gendo as the reason. If she can kill all the Rei clones later for revenge why not use Shinji earlier like you have. So please keep at this wonderful fic for all of us that like more then the main stream.
| Reviewed By: Cap'n Blah of the Old Eyesore On: July 19, 2005 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's not too bad, as such things go. It's a different premise from any I've seen before, and that's a good thing, though I absolutely cannot see Ritsuko wanting to sleep with Shinji. Also, the omakes started out amusing but they're getting way too long, and you're carrying them on way past the point where they cease to be funny. Stop at the punchline, please.
| Reviewed By: DJ On: July 09, 2005 01:23 CDT
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Interesting story. Probably one of the very few that has a smart Ritsuko trying to figure out how to actually win, one way or another, without being too reckless about it.
| Reviewed By: Name/Nick: On: May 25, 2005 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shinji x Ritsuko? I can't see it, not even like this. Incidentally, there is a story based on a similar concept (to wit, Ritsuko getting angry at Gendo and deciding to seduce Shinji in order to hurt Gendo) that Random1377 has already done ("Innocence Lost"), though you're going in a very different direction with it. You need to clean up your prose and dialogue, which are clumsy. And I think you've got Shinji and Asuka characterized well, but your version of Misato is more of a human dishrag than Shinji is, and I cannot imagine Ritsuko wanting to boink Shinji under any circumstances, not even with the great Random1377 writing the story. I like Ritsuko a lot. She's an underused character, underappreciated by the fandom, but what you seem to be building up to isn't in character for her. Ritsuko glomping Shinji and jumping his bones just to get under Gendo's skin is laughable. Ritsuko falling in love with Shinji leaves me blinking in disbelief. Shinji x Misato, perhaps--if handled delicately and written carefully to make her behavior believable. Shinji x Ritsuko? Uh, NO. It's not that I don't like the unusual pairings; I think Shinji x Misato can be beautiful and moving if written well. It's just that this is Ritsuko we're talking about here, and she Would Not Do This. Gendo is a father figure to her and an intellectual equal. He's powerful and ruthless. These are things Ritsuko finds appealing. Shinji is none of these things. She Would Not Do This.
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Reviewed By: Andrew J. Talon On: May 25, 2005 12:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have a question: How soon until you update?! This fic is already getting my attention and I must say it's welcome change from the S/A fics abounding around here. Keep it up! I can't wait to read more!
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