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| "new titan old friend" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Keep It Up
Reviewed By: Kiwi Ninamori [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 17:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The person below is being teacher strick on you, so what if you make spelling grammers, it's that you put your heart and soul into your work that matters^_^and I think you did just that, everyone makes mistakes, but do use grammer checker sometimes^_^
| Reviewed By: Omega_Red9 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
The idea has merit, but your style leaves much to be desired. There were numerous grammatical errors. I would recommend you get Elements of Style by E.B. White. It will give you a good foundation to follow when writing anything. I would also suggest that you re-read everything before you post it. It will allow you to catch some of the grammar errors and also give you the perspective of what the reader sees when he is trying to digest your work. It will help get your writning to sound a little smoother rather then the choppiness that is currently there.
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