| "Temporal Sequence" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Title: wow...
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow kepe up the good work and update again soon pleasE?
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Reviewed By: Vixenpi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 17:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really starting to enjoy your story. Goes at a good pace and outlines Kagome and Inuyasha's relationship well so it doesn't seem odd she might fall for Sesshoumaru. Keep it up! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome job, I love where this is going! Keep it comming!:)
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Reviewed By: ~Darkflameangel~ On: June 02, 2005 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
woot...wonderful chapter. i dont know about everyone else, but i havent ever read a story with a plot quite like this and i agree with your reasoning for the pace of the story. i like good fluff and romance as much as the next person, but a plot is needed. just jumping in and making like rabbits doesnt work well. i think that you have a great start to this story and i hope that you will update soon so that i can read the next addicting chapter. keep up the awesome work. Darkflameangel
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 01:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
good so far... i think you have an interesting idea. keep up the good work and i look forward to where you intend to take this story. Darkflameangel
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