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Title: damn...
Reviewed By: hells angel98 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 23:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow just...wow! I have only read like...3 stories ever that ae as good as this and yours tips the top. The way your characters express themselves and the way you write are perfect. Everthing is in perfect order in your story, like it was made to be written. If anything, you've inspired me to write better. Not to mention that I love the pairing. How did you ever come up with this story anyway? Very very awesome. Well I'm babbiling on like an idiot. But what I'm saying is true. You're writting is the best. And if you ever stop writing this fic I will personally hut you down and force you to write the rest... then destroy you... *eye twitch* kidding! Just keep up the good work mkay?
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!! the depth of the characters is amazing, it is truely a work of art! pleeeaaasseee update soon!
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Reviewed By: river(not logged in) On: August 21, 2006 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actually have been reading this on A Single Spark, but haven't been able to leave a review, the site keeps telling me that I am forbidden...so I decided to try here... I have been reading this story for the past couple of days and am really enjoying journey into Sesshoumaru's psyche (and Kagome's too!) The thing that stands out for me in this story is how the characters are not black and white...very often in Sess/Kag stories InuYasha is a complete childish ass from start to finish, but I like to think that he has his moments of clarity, and that he does care deeply for Kagome, actually loves her (more than as a sister) but thinks that it cannot be (for whatever reason). I also like how Kazuma's influence in Sesshoumaru's life is a double edged sword: his harsh training honed Sess' skills, something necessary for him to take over the Western Lands, but ruins part of him too...sometimes the price of 'tough love' is too high. Even though he had a lot of wisdom to pass on to Sesshoumaru, he kind of also passed on some of his bitter baggage. Of course, Inu-papa didn't help either. It is interesting to see Sesshoumaru piecing himself together coming from a pure space, allowing for him to examine his own feelings rather that compartmentalizing them based on his learned responses. Looking forward to the next installment (now I have to wait...wahhh!), I know there are still some more pieces of the puzzle to come! Please update soon and thank-you for sharing this story with us.
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 08:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I also started reading this on Single Spark and fell in love with it, currently Single Spark is changing servers and you can't review there. But I looking forward to more of this story, I think I'll check out your other works.
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Title: Jay FicLover
Reviewed By: Jay FicLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 08:42 CDT
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Just read this fic in A Single Spark and I just wanted to let you know I absolutely LOVED this fic, the way you explained Sesshoumaru's past is the most BELIEVABLE way I've ever seen, and I've read a lot of stories that tried and failed. Yet you seem to have succeeded in capturing Sesshoumaru's essence like nobody else I have ever found. EXCELLENT JOB! ^__^
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Reviewed By: RC46 On: July 23, 2006 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the work, looking forward to more. :)
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: RC46 On: July 20, 2006 04:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was wonderful wonderful please write more!
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Reviewed By: Vickey On: July 16, 2006 14:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're an excellent writer. great wordpictures. Please update.
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X (not signed in) On: August 01, 2005 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. Just wow! You are a wonderful writer. I love your story and it is going to the top of my favorits. I love how you show how Sess is in his head and the way he works. I was so sad to see that i read the last chapter that was done. I so want to see Inu or someone else find out about him and how he will react to someone treating him like him before they find out he isn't his old self... OMG what if inu finds him first, especialy if Kag wasn't there. Wow, so many great ways to go with this. I know you will pick a great one and i can't wait. PLease update soon! You can count on me for an review every chapter. So yeah, keep up the good work... ^_~
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 00:14 CDT
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yea! wonderful chapter...i think you did a wonderful job of getting inside sesshoumaru's head..i can only imagine how difficult it is for him...and yep im with him there..kagome is erratic. hmmm whats with the memory? well only time and the author will tell. update soon! im hooked on this story. Ja ne~ Darkflameangel
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Reviewed By: wing_hai (not logged in) On: June 26, 2005 04:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep writing, okay? I like the way this story is written. He likes her eyes! How gorgeous! Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: JackiaLioncourt On: June 24, 2005 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, I hope you update soon! love how u thought of Fluffy making arms for humans to destroy themsleves...lol and the therapist lolololol I can just imagine ... lolololololololol... UPDATE SOON PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: wing_hai (not logged in) On: June 16, 2005 07:25 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story to bits, please continue with it, you have me enthralled!
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Reviewed By: JackiaLioncourt On: June 14, 2005 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great writing, loved the chapter, especially the last line, pllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll llleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssssssssssss ssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel(not logged in) On: June 14, 2005 22:30 CDT
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woot...another wonderful chapter and an ego boosting review for you! hmmm....a delirious and gorgeous man complimenting you...i know my mind would take off for parts unknown and slightly hentai with a revelation such as that, but that could just be me. i like where you are going with this and you now have me pondering what shall happen next...if you go and throw a twist in there like Inuyasha kissing kagome and saying kikyo's name(which i probably woulda slapped him for after i came out of my lust induced stupor if i was kagome) i just dont know what i will do. well keep up the totally awesome work cause you are writing a kick a** story here! hooked and loving it...update soon Darkflameangel (aka DFA)
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