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Reviewed By: RC46 On: July 23, 2006 18:48 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Love the work, looking forward to more. :)
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Title: yay Reviewed By: RC46 On: July 20, 2006 04:55 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: It was wonderful wonderful please write more!
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Reviewed By: Vickey On: July 16, 2006 14:40 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You're an excellent writer. great wordpictures. Please update.
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Title: OMG Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X (not signed in) On: August 01, 2005 17:45 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: WOW. Just wow! You are a wonderful writer. I love your story and it is going to the top of my favorits. I love how you show how Sess is in his head and the way he works. I was so sad to see that i read the last chapter that was done. I so want to see Inu or someone else find out about him and how he will react to someone treating him like him before they find out he isn't his old self... OMG what if inu finds him first, especialy if Kag wasn't there. Wow, so many great ways to go with this. I know you will pick a great one and i can't wait. PLease update soon! You can count on me for an review every chapter. So yeah, keep up the good work... ^_~
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 00:14 CDT Comment/Review: yea! wonderful chapter...i think you did a wonderful job of getting inside sesshoumaru's head..i can only imagine how difficult it is for him...and yep im with him there..kagome is erratic. hmmm whats with the memory? well only time and the author will tell. update soon! im hooked on this story. Ja ne~ Darkflameangel
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Reviewed By: wing_hai (not logged in) On: June 26, 2005 04:55 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Keep writing, okay? I like the way this story is written. He likes her eyes! How gorgeous! Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: JackiaLioncourt On: June 24, 2005 21:40 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great chapter, I hope you update soon! love how u thought of Fluffy making arms for humans to destroy themsleves...lol and the therapist lolololol I can just imagine ... lolololololololol... UPDATE SOON PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: wing_hai (not logged in) On: June 16, 2005 07:25 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love this story to bits, please continue with it, you have me enthralled!
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Reviewed By: JackiaLioncourt On: June 14, 2005 23:19 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great writing, loved the chapter, especially the last line, pllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll llleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssssssssssss ssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel(not logged in) On: June 14, 2005 22:30 CDT Comment/Review: woot...another wonderful chapter and an ego boosting review for you! hmmm....a delirious and gorgeous man complimenting you...i know my mind would take off for parts unknown and slightly hentai with a revelation such as that, but that could just be me. i like where you are going with this and you now have me pondering what shall happen next...if you go and throw a twist in there like Inuyasha kissing kagome and saying kikyo's name(which i probably woulda slapped him for after i came out of my lust induced stupor if i was kagome) i just dont know what i will do. well keep up the totally awesome work cause you are writing a kick a** story here! hooked and loving it...update soon Darkflameangel (aka DFA)
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Title: wow... Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 20:43 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: wow kepe up the good work and update again soon pleasE?
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Reviewed By: Vixenpi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 17:53 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Really starting to enjoy your story. Goes at a good pace and outlines Kagome and Inuyasha's relationship well so it doesn't seem odd she might fall for Sesshoumaru. Keep it up! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 12:29 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Awesome job, I love where this is going! Keep it comming!:)
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Reviewed By: ~Darkflameangel~ On: June 02, 2005 22:41 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: woot...wonderful chapter. i dont know about everyone else, but i havent ever read a story with a plot quite like this and i agree with your reasoning for the pace of the story. i like good fluff and romance as much as the next person, but a plot is needed. just jumping in and making like rabbits doesnt work well. i think that you have a great start to this story and i hope that you will update soon so that i can read the next addicting chapter. keep up the awesome work. Darkflameangel
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 01:02 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: good so far... i think you have an interesting idea. keep up the good work and i look forward to where you intend to take this story. Darkflameangel
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