| "Falling For You" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: fireflyskies [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 23:12 CDT
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I was gone for a week and you got two chapters up. I loved them. I agree, drunk people should never talk. Thank you so much for reviewing my story, it meant a lot to me. By the way, the fics I usually read are anime based ones, and I see the same plot over and over again in them. I don't read much original writing even though that's what I write. Ok, better stop, getting off the subject. I'm not gonna say to update soon, cause I'm really bad about that. Keep up the good work, can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Darkfire Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 21:12 CDT
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>> Not good. Drunk people should never talk.
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Reviewed By: Darkfire Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 12:09 CDT
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I won't mind your writing delays as long as you don't mind my review delays. I travel during summer, spending up to 2-3 weeks away from the comp. xx; The plot sure is getting interesting though. I can't wait to see what happens next. ^^ Sadly, I have no smart comment/jokes to make. ;_; But at least I said something. ^^;;;
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Title: Excellence
Reviewed By: Oensaiga [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm quite impressed. You are an extremely creative writer, and you continue to improve. I have enjoyed reading your fictions. Can't wait for your next works.
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Reviewed By: fireflyskies [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 01:31 CDT
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I loved it, it's so different from the fics that I usually read. I wish I had your talent, then maybe people would like my stories more. *sigh* oh well. Keep up the great work, I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: MeTaL_cHiCk04 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 10:37 CDT
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Really liked the chapter. A lot less gramatical errors than usual. (I know I'm a pain in the ass. lol) I'm glad you didn't off the guy this time. ;) I've got an idea for you but I'll just call you later after I get out of work. Good writin', keep typin'. I look forward to reading the next chapter. :D
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Title: Love it! ^_^
Reviewed By: pin_ On: June 12, 2005 01:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! It's so unique, original, creative, and awesome! I love the bad boy vs. good guy theme, and I love romance, so that's instantly an added bonus. I also love the "devil in a Catholic school" type idea. This story is very intriguing and interesting. Please continue! ^_^ I can't wait to read more! ~Grace
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Reviewed By: Darkfire Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 00:18 CDT
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See? It only took 2 chapters to break her. >=D ^^; Hot is it over there? I'm in Idaho, and it's freaking raining up here. It's even hailed not that long ago. xx; Idiotic weather. Anyway, good job with the story. ^^ I can't wait to se how her fantasy and reality come crashing together. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Darkfire Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 13:37 CDT
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And now I'm outta school. Whoot, Sophmore in Highschool-ness! ^^ and Bre's way of thinking does make me wonder if she's still virgin O.o Yet another good chapter! and yes, we love chemistry in the lab. So mcuh tension. Especially when you wonder what might happen if they get caught doing the wrong experiments. ^^
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Reviewed By: Amaria(not logged in) On: June 04, 2005 16:58 CDT
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*claps*another good chapter,very nice.Lying to your boyfriend can never lead to anything good.....lol.looking forward to next chapter,as usual:)
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Reviewed By: Darkfire Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 23:01 CDT
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I am writing a strange little romance-to-be fic. Dragons and humans don't mix as well as they should I've figured out. ^^U So... I'm going to fix it up a little. And its gotten off to an interesting start. But back to your fic, is there chemistry here or what? Especially in the lab. I am guessing three chapters tops to get her to say those three words. Er, are you going to be able to tell me if you kill anyone? Just curious.
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Reviewed By: Amaria(not logged in) On: May 31, 2005 15:16 CDT
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well thankyou for checking out my story,and yes you left a reveiw..it meant alot to me.Anyways,good chapter,Devon sounds like some of the arrogant 12th grader's at my school......lol,anyways,really enjoying it so far,keep it up!:)
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Reviewed By: Darkfire Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 21:44 CDT
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No, it's not at all disspaointing. This way I can give a review for each chapter. This is getting to be interesting. Very interesting indeed. Makes me want to write my own romances. ^_~ Looking forward to your next chanpter!
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Reviewed By: Amaria [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 09:49 CDT
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heya Foamy!liked your other fic so much,I decided to check out this one....well written,good plot,well done characters....I love it :) lol.Um..I hate to ask..but would you mind checking out my fic called Old Friends,New Love? I'd really appreciate it,but you don't have to.Anyways,good chapter,looking forward to the next one :D
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Reviewed By: Darkfire Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 14:04 CDT
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Yay, here I am. But little time to say anything, she bell just rang. Looks promising so far. Keep it up. I'll be expecting to read a bit when I get back from a small trip. I won't review for a while, but I won't forget!
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