| "Falling For You" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: coarse dareei [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 16:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I just wanted to send you more feedback to encourage you to write more!! Ahhhh! The beauty of the story really captures me...Ahh beauty... I really like how you're putting this story together so I added it to me favoritES....yES yES. Please continue...I'm in dire need of a beautiful love story. I'm on one of those moods...lol. Keep up the awesome work!
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Reviewed By: coarse dareei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 03:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh why must you end there? Ahh... such a good story! I find the relationship transformation intriguing...I like how you're carefully writing this all out. It doesn't contain too many physical descriptions and whatnot, but the internal conversations are more than enough to overtake all that! Anyways, please continue writing! It's so funny how I just happened upon your story searching around MediaMiner for something to entertain me while I finish my apple...hehe. Thanks!
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Title: Yay!!!
Reviewed By: firemoonhalk [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 21:31 CST
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funness funnesss funnessss.... although very pg... lol. but it was cute ^_^ i like it. Sorry if i don't comment much anymore, this monkey has moved and does not have regular internet access anymore... and my own love story going on... XD so ya, buisy life has gotten busier.... but i love the story none-the-less and can't wait for update! ^_^
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Title: -crys-
Reviewed By: firemoonhalk [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 22:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you forgotted me again.... waaaaahhhhhhh!!!!!! i'm kidding, don't feel bad ;) i'm kidding, it's ok. great chap! XD more plot twists!!! plot twists!!! plot twists!!! althoug i must agree with Risu... more kinkyness would be good.... -giggles-
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Title: sorries...
Reviewed By: firemoonhalk [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 03:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a bad little monkey... and a very impatient one... please update, i've been trying not to beg for, like, a week now.... PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!! -crys- i want to know what's going onnnnnnnnn... -clears throat- sorries... didn't mean to... gaugh! more story good... this monkey lives off the creative-ness of the story... and i'm starving... -dies-
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Reviewed By: Amaria [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 21:55 CDT
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Gah! I missed the updates and just now had to catch up! *mutters about email not giving out alerts* Wow...dramatic tension is afoot! But I have to say, I enjoyed this chapter (and the others) very much. Your a good writer, and I look forward to your next update.
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Title: sdgsdfsdSDASDSD
Reviewed By: Risu_Bento [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 18:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
RAWRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!! !!!! Need...more...kinkyness! Hentai sustenance is running low in my body...must have KINKYNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Scyggy On: September 26, 2005 11:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*digs his jaw out of the ground before attempting to speak* Wow... who knew I would find such an AMAZING story while surfing for, well... y'know... on MediaMiner. You are a most excellent author, and I await the next chapter with anticipation.
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Title: ah!
Reviewed By: firemoonhalk(not logged in) On: September 22, 2005 23:07 CDT
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Gaugh!!! ahhh!!!! MORE EVIL ENDINGS LEAVING ME HANGING ON THE CLIFF.... AHHH.... NO FALLING... -sigh- -dances- I'm a good monkey, I'm a good monkey, good monkey, good monkey, good monkey! LOL I have so had days like that... oh, evilness they are... especally when a coustomer gets mad at you and yells and throws things at you.... -sigh- please update soon! -puppy eyes-
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Title: dude...
Reviewed By: Firemoonhalk(not logged in) On: September 14, 2005 23:55 CDT
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I realized that most of the mesages on here... at least the ones that are consecutive by the same person are mine... lol... does that mean i'm your most loyal monkey? -squeeks and swings to another branch-
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Reviewed By: Firemoonhalk(not logged in) On: September 14, 2005 23:51 CDT
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gaugh!! zoe' is ganna be hell... funness ^_^;; i've been checking religiosly for new chapters.. i squeekled when this updated... XD yay!!! it just figures.... things like that happen all the time... lol... excited for updates to come! and yes, i can't spell at all.... it's horable..
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Title: Title Insert Here
Reviewed By: Choi-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2005 23:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa, I like this. I've only read the first chapter though and am still eagerly anticipating the Catholic school boys. I should say though, high school life in California isn't really bacon and egg-ish. Private schools (Yeah, I've done the religious paid education thing.) can be pretty prim and stuff, but there wasn't anything that said typical "California" to make up for that. This is a cool story though, and it was the first chapter, so don't worry about it. =)
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Title: oops
Reviewed By: Firemoonhalk(not logged in) On: September 07, 2005 23:52 CDT
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i misspelled my name... that takes skill... ya... spelling sucks...
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Title: noticed monkey
Reviewed By: Firemoonhall(not logged in) On: September 07, 2005 23:50 CDT
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^_^ yay, this monkey has been noticed... ^_^ i like the budding relationship between cass and brent... but also the whole termoile between bre and brent... very funness all around... ^_^
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Title: mew...
Reviewed By: firemoonhalk [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 01:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!! I love it so funness... you've got me checking for updates daily... sad... oh well, I love the story. ^_^ But I also understand how stressful having a life is... I'm working two jobs and going to school... it sucks... so ya please hurry, but no pressure ^_^
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Title: ugh
Reviewed By: firemoonhalk [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 01:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have to say, when i got to the end of where you had updated and read the last little bit, i woke my sister up cause i scremed 'gah!!!!' but i didn't care... evil place to stop... major clifhanger... you need to update... soon please! i love the story and hang on this cliff by one hand... please hurry and save me lol.
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Reviewed By: wench On: August 17, 2005 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhhhhhh, cassie knows something. love the chapter and can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: LT Stryffe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 14:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ HI FF-CHAN!!! Bet you didn't think you'd ever see me again since AS went down, huh? Well, I remembered that you had an account here, sooooo, here I am, stalking your fan fic as I've promised! XD! I simply LOVED these chapters that I missed, and I hope that you update soon!! *glomps* You've got such a wonderful story going, keep it up! ^^ Oh, random, tell your new kitty I said HI! XD
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Title: NOOOOO!!!!
Reviewed By: RisuBento On: August 09, 2005 14:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another...semi-limey chapter...**sigh** I'm becoming dehydrated from all of the missing hentai-ness! Make a raunchy chapter that'll make fall off my chair dead...okay maybe not dead-dead...but maybe...shocked out my hentai mind dead...yeah! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: wench On: August 07, 2005 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanks... again, i applaud u for another great chapter. im guessing the drama's gonna start once they get back! can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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Reviewed By: Darkfire Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 09:38 CDT
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Hey hey, I'm back. ^^ And look at these pwetty wittle chapies for me to read. I love your writing! *inspired, goes off to write a novel!!* ^^ Please continue!!
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Reviewed By: wench On: July 29, 2005 01:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am in love with this story!!! ur a GREAT writer... definitely waiting for another chapter. :)
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Title: HOORAY!
Reviewed By: Risu_Bento [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAAAH! SUCH A SHORT CHAPTER! Please continue! I can't wait to find out when Breanna's boyfriend finds out and all hell breaks loose! ***Does a happy dance around Sombrero while chugging Tequila*** Youssh isht a goodsh authorsh.
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Title: mew?
Reviewed By: Jessiey On: July 23, 2005 15:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your fic is awsome, please update... I've never comented before but I think this story is book worthey and needs to be comented upon. The enjoyment factor should go to eleven. ^_^ lol
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Reviewed By: Amaria [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 20:39 CDT
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sorry I havn't been reveiwing this story...stupid me being lazy^^; anyways....this fic is awesome, this chapter was awesome, you are an swesome writer....it's amazing the way you make it seem almost real life, like it actually happened! sorry,I'm just rambling, my bad. Anyways, it was great,looking forward to the update, I hope my new story will end up as good as your storys. Amaria
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Title: Yum!
Reviewed By: Risu_Bento [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nicely done! I truly enjoy this fic very much! Please continue with kinky and adrenalized chapters...I'm...NOT...a pervert. ***nose suddenly grows long***SHIT!
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Reviewed By: fireflyskies [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 17:13 CDT
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I was so happy when I found that you had updated. I checked and checked and checked and now it's finally here. That was a twist when they went to play at the playground, I wasn't expecting that. I really want to know what Devon is hiding, ao maybe if I beg, you'll tell me. *Puppy dog eyes* Keep up the great work, can't wait til the next chapter.
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