Title: Poem Reviewed By: hells-angel On: May 26, 2005 22:38 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Very awesome poem! I liked all three but this is my favorite! You captured the moment of the lovers very well and I love the descriptions of them as well. Duo's hair wiping in the breeze, and Heero's eyes, described briefly but with a well developed effect. Nice job! *Hugs!*
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