| "No longer alone" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Miko Aelita On: August 29, 2005 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a great fan fic, i dont usually like to read fan fictions but i liked this one. you did a really good job on it, except for some spelling and grammar mistakes it was still really good^-^
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Reviewed By: Kou19 On: July 19, 2005 01:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There is only one thing you need to know. veal is not calf. that's beaf. veal is deer meat. other than that, i loved your story.
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Reviewed By: Anoynomous On: July 19, 2005 01:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love your fic but there is one thing tthat bothered me.. and its not the story. its what you said at the end of chap 23. veal is not calf. calf is beef. or whatever else. mostly beaf. which is cow. veal is deer meat. sorry if i seem nerdy. but i am not. i am anything but nerd.
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Title: Nver seen..
Reviewed By: Siobhain On: July 14, 2005 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Never Seen this pairing before. But...I like it. 'Course I still like YukixKyo more, but this excellent. And You style of writing is.....wow.
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Reviewed By: me On: July 13, 2005 19:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: theblackrose(offline) On: July 13, 2005 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAHHHHH!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU MADE THIS COUPLE WORK!!! I love your story and hope to see more!! (Unlike me, you can write entertaining fanfics and not have to demand reviews as much) ^_________^ hope to see more ... wait, I already said that. Uhhh. Damn. oh well. *takes fanfic and runs away*
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Reviewed By: Dae On: July 12, 2005 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. That's all I really have to say. ^^ Dae
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Title: gh
Reviewed By: blergh On: July 02, 2005 20:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
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Title: Wow.
Reviewed By: Audria On: July 01, 2005 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god, your writing is fucking fantastic. It's very unique, it's a couple I've never seen before, the spelling could be better =P, and I completely loved it. I can't wait until you come out with the next chapter. I would enjoy longer chapters, but that's because I love this series too much. I absolutely adore your detailed writing and the suspense. Your fic has filled me with so many emotions, laughter, happiness, sadness, sorrow, misery, and..it was just amazing. You are a wonderful writer. I would love to see a sequel to this fic, and some other fics. I loved this and...It's just too amazing.
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Title: Hello newbie.
Reviewed By: BizarreLoveTriangle [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good start. Make the chapters a little longer, or else you'll end up with too many and it'll look discouraging to readers with short attention spans. I like your style though and I'm glad to see your in the world of slash.
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